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    2026: What's unique about today?

    I wake up and breathe...
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    Actually coherent criticism?

    I tend to avoid judging whether someone's writing is written by AI or not. Even AI detectors claim their results are likely biased. Bad writing isn't necessarily AI-written. And vice versa. There are even AI-written works available for sale on Amazon. It's entirely possible our analysis is...
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    Actually coherent criticism?

    No problem. If you're using chatgpt or another chatbot, it's best to use the limited (temporary) chat feature, which doesn't save your conversations, as it doesn't assume any previous history has been saved. This way, chapter assessments can be more objective. Also, get into the habit of using...
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    How to shift Perspective in First-person perspective novel?

    It depends on how you cut the scenes. The "-" or "*" are simply narrative separators. However, some platforms (e.g., Inkitt) don't recommend (or discourage) using these separators because they can disrupt the narrative tone.
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    Actually coherent criticism?

    Why not ask a colleague, friend, or family member to critique your work? I've heard of some authors doing this. Alternatively, you could conduct a comparative study of your work with others to gauge how well your narrative performs.
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    How to shift Perspective in First-person perspective novel?

    Switching between first-person and third-person limited POV changes the tone, vibe, and overall narration. Unlike third-person limited POV, the POV can flexibly switch between characters within a scene based solely on gaze, emotional state, and the perspective of the conflict. Because...
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    Glossary examples

    For some readers, glossaries may be unfriendly due to their spoiler content. You can see an example of my fiction glossary, which explains character design and worldbuilding...
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    ? Happy New Year! ?

    Happy New Month!
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    You Wake Up To A System Message…

    I hope to wake up in an eternal sleep system... then I will sleep for a long, long time, until the conflict and war are over and wake up when the world is better.
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    People may make fun of me, but I won't hesitate to say that I prefer my mother's cooking to food...

    People may make fun of me, but I won't hesitate to say that I prefer my mother's cooking to food from outside.
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    @JayMark is right.?
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    LitRPG and Systems

    Read Kumo Desu LN. It's a solid isekai LitRPG with a coherent system and lore.
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    Would You Keep Reading?

    What kind of feedback do you want? I checked SH and RR, your engagement isn't good. This might be a classic problem, story packaging. First, your synopsis doesn't provide a hook. You explain the lore in the synopsis. System, dystopian world, humanity? Who cares? Instead of explaining the...
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    New Year's fireworks symbolize new hope and togetherness. However, due to various circumstances...

    New Year's fireworks symbolize new hope and togetherness. However, due to various circumstances throughout the year, fireworks are not lit. Some places ban them as a show of solidarity with tragedies such as disasters or wars. Others prohibit them due to tradition. Still others prohibit them...
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    I don't live in Jakarta. Why do you think I live there? Lol

    I don't live in Jakarta. Why do you think I live there? Lol
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    No

    No
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    New Year's without fireworks. Maybe... it's not too bad. At least the night sky would be more...

    New Year's without fireworks. Maybe... it's not too bad. At least the night sky would be more silent.
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    Have a good trip, Nyaa. Don't forget to bring a warm jacket! It's cold outside.

    Have a good trip, Nyaa. Don't forget to bring a warm jacket! It's cold outside.
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Have a good trip, Nyaa. Don't forget to bring a warm jacket! It's cold outside.
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