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  1. Eldoria

    I'm just a wounded world after loving too much...

    I'm just a wounded world after loving too much...
  2. Eldoria

    RIP Kusa/Alaska

    I don't even know who they are...
  3. Eldoria

    Asking for some feed back on my story.

    As a mobile reader, my eyes feel dry reading giant paragraphs like this.
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    Weak Protagonist, OP Protagonist, or somewhere in between?

    Well, some people use fiction to channel their Oedipus complex. Honestly, it's a bit creepy. We don't see mothers like that even in fiction; after all, it's our mothers who give birth to us (unless someone is born from a rock like Sun Wukong).
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    Weak Protagonist, OP Protagonist, or somewhere in between?

    That is the last fiction I will read. I prefer the type of mother like Cayna and Azusa.
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    Weak Protagonist, OP Protagonist, or somewhere in between?

    That's a valid criticism based on reader experience. It's precisely because of this that I wrote my fiction about the OP mother struggling to protect her little daughter's innocence in a post-apocalyptic (moral) world. It's a complete subversion of mainstream fiction. No fanservice, only mother...
  7. Eldoria

    How do characters talk with the System?

    Ciel chan...
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    Weak Protagonist, OP Protagonist, or somewhere in between?

    What about an innocent protagonist with an OP (overprotective) mother?
  9. Eldoria

    Weak Protagonist, OP Protagonist, or somewhere in between?

    I'm not really a fan of either type of protagonist, whether strong or weak. I prefer humane protagonists. They may be strong but have limitations, trauma, motivations, and act based on situations that might seem wrong to the readers, but right from their perspective. Humane protagonists present...
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    Writing [Tutorial] How to Create A Title That's Both Reader and SEO-Friendly

    SEO—short for search engine optimization—is about helping search engines understand your content, and helping users find your site and make a decision about whether they should visit your site through a search engine...
  11. Eldoria

    Book titles have changed: From abstract to full sentences..

    Please read this thread: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/tutorial-how-to-create-a-title-thats-both-reader-and-seo-friendly.26148/
  12. Eldoria

    So i am curious.... when making your stories.....

    If you're afraid to write fiction solely for the fear of writing a racist narrative (which is the conflict of fiction, not the moral of fiction), then you'd better keep your hand off the pen or keyboard. The world of fiction is more brutal than just racism. There are giant, building-high...
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    They laugh at me and call me childish just because I like cartoons, anime, and similar fantasy...

    They laugh at me and call me childish just because I like cartoons, anime, and similar fantasy stories. However, they actually complicate their own lives, making simple things even more complicated, throwing tantrums, whining, and even insulting those they oppose, as if they were living in a...
  14. Eldoria

    Are You Plotter or Panther?

    My lore is a narrative extension for a long-running series. My synopsis is a promise and a contract I keep. And the fictional ending? Well, I decided on that even before the fiction was released. I could write the fictional ending now (I'll just keep it until the end).
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    What makes you love the fantasy genre?

    Fantasy Genre When I was a child, I loved cartoons and the like. As I grew up, people started laughing at me when I chose cartoons over realistic stories like Korean dramas. Well, I don't care what others think; I don't think my tastes have changed much; I still enjoy fantasy stories. The only...
  16. Eldoria

    LitRPG question

    What I mean is, what kind of litRPG is in your fiction? There's a big difference between pure litRPG (hardcore) and subtle litRPG. Hardcore litRPG is obviously too mechanical, based on statistics. It almost feels like a game rather than fiction. While subtle litRPG simply borrows RPG elements as...
  17. Eldoria

    Feedback request —the uncrowned paragon ( survival, escape, and complex power system)(please i really need it)

    For other people, isekai fans, maybe yes. For me, who is full of isekai, NO. This question is irrelevant to me (as a reader). I haven't read isekai MCs in a long time. I now prefer local MCs who create organically-feeling conflict. Judging from the fictional premise... the MC's motivation is...
  18. Eldoria

    LitRPG question

    Hardcore LitRPG or Subtle LitRPG?
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    First Chapter Opening - Feedback on Prose & Hook (please)

    Your narrative lacks immersion. Honestly, I felt bored and had difficulty visualising the scenes in this chapter. Why? Because it's more tell it than show it. You give short lines of dialogue and then provide detailed explanations. The result? Your pacing slows down. When you explain what's...
  20. Eldoria

    You said it, not me. Lol

    You said it, not me. Lol
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