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Alice-chan, I want to write your narrative...

No problem. Use POV as needed in your narrative. Make sure readers know who's speaking and what the situation is. I provided an example of a chapter where the first person POV transitions to the third person POV without confusing readers below:

First, make a habit of opening your chapter with an atmospheric opening. This isn't just about aesthetics, but also about the context of the scene: Where is the MC? When does the scene take place? What is the situation? What is the MC doing? Who is the MC interacting with? This is crucial to...

She's still too young to read it (well, I, as an adult, don't even read it. lol). You might want to suggest more friendly fiction that anyone can read. Yuru Camp, for example.

Almost all the human characters in my fiction (except the truly evil ones)... I love them. Because they represent personal and humane issues, and can even be considered a worldview about social issues. However, if I had to choose one of them, I would choose the little princess from FMC, Caelan...

The issue isn't how many MCs you have, but how prominent your characters are. If the MCs are 1D or 2D characters who are too monotonous, they tend to be forgotten. You need to design humane characters (3D), ensuring each MC has a unique voice that readers can recognize. Please read this...

Of course, why not?

Author Type as Ending Maker Plan an unexpected ending from the beginning, providing neat foreshadowing in the chapters and executing it consistently in the epilogue (e.g. Death Note). Plan an ending from the beginning that is predictable or expected (usually stated in the MC's motivation) and...

Cultural Promotion Through Fiction I've read a lot of fiction that uses subtle cultural promotion through fiction. This is common in mainstream Eastern fiction. For example, isekai genre is known for being very Japan-centric (especially if written by a Japanese author). The protagonist...

Well, you could argue that. But, as far as the sci-fi fiction I've read goes, it's generally more speculative and imaginative than scientific. Let's take a simple example: warp dive technology. Sci-fi fiction often depicts space travel as possible with this technology. However, it's more...

Sci-fi = futuristic technological fantasy. Sci-fi is built on the basic assumption of 'imaginative' technology that surpasses the present. Anything imaginative, not realistic, is fantasy.

Overall, the narrative is better than before. The pacing is quite smooth. However, there are some notes that could be improved: The paragraph is still quite long. It could be cut into two paragraphs (1-3 sentences per paragraph). These two sentences can be combined into one paragraph. Then...

Gender bender again?! You don't need to worry about readers... it's a super genre that guarantees readers.

The difficulty isn't just the technical aspects of writing, but also the writer's mental resilience. Writing in fantasy sub-genres, except dark fantasy, such as wholesome fantasy, power fantasy, or wish-fulfilment, allows you to relax and imagine something pleasant. But dark fantasy requires you...

My opinion may be unpopular, but writing fiction is very tiring, especially if you write dark fantasy fiction... I get depressed after writing 1 dark chapter... and don't dare to touch my fiction for a few days to a week. Especially if you are asked to write something creepy, and you don't like...

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