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I only want one thing from a character: She/he must live in her/his world as a living character. Well, a living character is a character who is truly human, able to think, feel, have experiences, values, and views on life. Fandom often refers to living characters as 3D characters. I don't...

I won't give you title advice. You know your fiction best. But you can consider my advice if you want your title to stand out not only among thousands of fiction but also be recognized by SEO. Consider giving a unique, concrete title that describes the premise of your fiction. Don't make the...

I'll be honest with you. Your chapter is not interesting. I have a hard time visualizing this scene and feeling neutral. Some things you need to reconsider: (1) Your chapter is still more tell-it than show-it. The narrator is telling the story rather than letting the FMC act as a living...

You don't need to type (write) it. The latest keyboards simply listen to your speech and translate it into text.

What game is that? I've never heard of it.

Submit your story here. The thread creator clearly promises to provide free feedback. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/story-feedback.26131/

Focus on the stories that you can complete. I've seen too many stopping stories after being released less than 10 chapters.

Karl Marx would cry reading this. Personally, I just wish the author had explored more realistically and in-depth the other side of humanity, whether psychologically, anthropologically, sociologically, or geopolitically, and depicted how the consequences impacted the MC (so the reader could...

It's insane in a good way. This lore is incredibly complex psychologically, socially, politically, and geopolitically.

Your title isn't provocative enough. I thought this thread was asking for feedback. It's the opposite. Please change the title to something more direct, like "Hello! I'm a reader offering feedback to the wise author..." That way, you'll be inundated with requests until you can't breathe...

It... reminds me of the siege of Kaliningrad

Sorry, @Bimbanana , off topic for a moment. @Zinless do you put your fiction outside of SH and RR? This site clearly features your work. I also found it on some other sites when crawling.

You're right. That's why I write narratives to heal (therapy) the world's wounds.

I am Eldoria, a world that loves, thinks, feels, is traumatised, and is broken.

Discord is a platform for your community. If you want to build a loyal fan base, creating a Discord account is worth considering. Personally, I don't have a Discord account and haven't felt the need to, as I write niche fiction (not popular).

Don't explicitly explain spoilers. Lore is a major event that serves as the secret ingredient to your narrative. Please explain it in general terms, as in the example above, without going into further detail.

Lore in Fiction Lore is a system of knowledge, a collection of stories, mythology, and world history that provides the backdrop for what is happening today. Lore is the worldbuilding that makes fiction feel immersive, vivid, and narratively realistic. The Naruto series features chakra, tailed...

That's a reasonable choice. But it also risks diminishing the author's credibility. If an author is so quick to drop her/his fiction while it's still ongoing, is there any guarantee the author won't do the same to other published works simply due to lack of engagement? Well, all choices are...

If you've only published about ten chapters, it's best to simply update them with rewrites. Initial failure is normal; no author succeeds immediately (except for a few lucky ones, and there are exceptions, of course).

The main antagonist in my fiction is the incarnation of the collective trauma of world history. She isn't simply evil for evil's sake; she's evil because the world makes her evil. She is a representation of what will happen if a rotten world continues to hurt its victims? And well, the world...