Search results

  1. Eldoria

    Best Novel

    For me, cultivation is a plot device or worldbuilding, not a narrative goal (read: the protagonist's motivation). So, personally, I'm less attracted to fiction that places cultivation as a goal. If you make cultivation purely worldbuilding, that might be better.
  2. Eldoria

    Writing How's the new title?

    It's still abstract and lacks emotional depth. Please read the following thread: https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/tutorial-how-to-create-a-title-that's-both-reader-and-seo-friendly.26148/
  3. Eldoria

    What is the best advice for beginner authors?

    https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/tutorial-how-to-create-a-title-thats-both-reader-and-seo-friendly.26148/
  4. Eldoria

    Do you write multiple stories?

    Well, I have 4 series. But only 1 series is actively updated. From the beginning, I was too ambitious to write a lot of fiction. The harsh reality... limited energy, limited time, limited resources... limited creativity... everything is limited. We live in 2 worlds: fiction and the...
  5. Eldoria

    A selfish request

    Well, take a breath... let it go! Relax! It might not be as bad as you worry. Believe yourself! You can do it. Good luck! Regards.
  6. Eldoria

    Well, finishing a battle chapter with 2K words might not be bad especially after a few days of...

    Well, finishing a battle chapter with 2K words might not be bad especially after a few days of not writing. Almost 90 chapters have been written... and maybe up to 100 chapters just for vol. 2. Just a little bit more... I hope to finish this arc soon. Alice chan is waiting for me in vol. 3.
  7. Eldoria

    My opinion may be unpopular (or controversial)... but a harem could be considered more of a form...

    My opinion may be unpopular (or controversial)... but a harem could be considered more of a form of female objectification, a collection of beautiful women in a palace. Just the thought of it makes my skin crawl.
  8. Eldoria

    However, local FMC can also be interesting. Consider Majo no Tabitabi and Frieren. These anime...

    However, local FMC can also be interesting. Consider Majo no Tabitabi and Frieren. These anime are engaging, featuring local FMCs, exploring fantasy worlds. If they were reincarnated FMCs, the thematic story might not be as deep.
  9. Eldoria

    Well, I understand that. Reincarnated characters can be considered representations of modern...

    Well, I understand that. Reincarnated characters can be considered representations of modern readers. That's why it's difficult to view reincarnated FMC without separating them from the modern world.
  10. Eldoria

    Well, reincarnation otome has a wide market. However, I wish more authors would write local...

    Well, reincarnation otome has a wide market. However, I wish more authors would write local FMCs, princesses who grew up in a fantasy world (not reincarnations), because the conflict would feel more organic and grounded. Note: My FMC is also a former princess of a local kingdom. You could...
  11. Eldoria

    Finished My First Arc/Volume Today!

    Congratulations. A great first step. You'll learn to narrate fiction even better after finishing volume 1.
  12. Eldoria

    Criticism and comment for Boys gang

    If you're asking for feedback... please create a thread in the feedback category. Don't post it here, don't forget to include links and specifics of what you're criticizing. Please don't make misunderstanding to others. Regards.
  13. Eldoria

    Criticism and comment for Boys gang

    What do you mean by boy gang? I don't understand what you're referring to...who are they?
  14. Eldoria

    Writing Tips on how to write Mecha battles a little more interesting!

    This is off topic... but I sometimes wonder... why there are no mecha in the real world even though it's technically possible to produce it (regardless of how expensive it would be). Instead of producing mecha... modern militaries are focused on developing fighter aircraft up to the 6th generation.
  15. Eldoria

    Uggggh. Cringe.

    just ignore it
  16. Eldoria

    what's your favorite aspect when you are writing?

    I can't be polite about something that's harsh and cruel. Because the sounds of screams, anger, and tragedy are often heard more than the disguised polite voice.
  17. Eldoria

    what's your favorite aspect when you are writing?

    Well, when it comes to meta-aspects, what I love most is when a narrative successfully encapsulates social discourse into a coherent social critique that's relevant to real-world issues. Internally, I enjoy writing heartwarming scenes like the sweet interactions between a mother and her little...
  18. Eldoria

    Some insane people enjoy extremism and consider it art. I can tolerate it a little if it's just...

    Some insane people enjoy extremism and consider it art. I can tolerate it a little if it's just a narrative of conflict. But when it becomes a fictional morality (cannibalistic psychopathic protagonists), then the author is clearly sick!
  19. Eldoria

    Help

    Put your content of the chapter you want reviewed in the thread. This is simple but important. It would be a pain to just go back and forth links to point out errors. Be patient until someone takes the time to check your work.
  20. Eldoria

    Can someone give feedback on my work

    Ask politely like everyone else, put your content of the chapter you want reviewed in the thread (this is simple but important. It would be a pain to just go back and forth links to point out errors) and be patient until someone takes the time to check your work.
Top