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Okay, that's better. I still don't like the NTR element in the prologue. However, if that's your artistic choice, I'll respect it. Other readers are welcome to share their feedback. Regards.

I'll be honest and maybe a little harsh. First, your prologue is like any mainstream Chinese manhua or novel I've ever read. It's very typical... a protagonist with a sick (and then deceased) family member and a cheating lover. I understand you might want to create a tragic and complex...

Great, keep going! By the way, we already have a slime girl... and you could have just written slime boy. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/120486/slime-girl/

I appreciate your commitment above. We do need dark fantasy fiction that explores other worlds without disguising itself as another genre. However, perhaps I've had enough of tower and dungeon fiction. For some reason, I now prefer fiction that's meaningful and can make me cry, rather than...

You're free to write any fiction you want as long as you're responsible for your work. By the way, I prefer knights to samurai. I wonder what would happen if a knight fought a samurai? Well, experts say the knight would likely win because their armor is too strong for the samurai to cut through.

Alice-chan... be patient! The narration will soon reach your part...

Three humane responses when the protagonist faces danger or an antagonist that is too strong: flight, fight, or freeze.

Well, pacing requires a keen sense of precision. Essentially, use fast pacing for action scenes through cinematic narrative and short dialogues with emphasis on symbolism. Conversely, use slow pacing for reflection, SoL, character development, and building suspense through descriptive narrative...

Well, it's very difficult to generalize what fiction inspires me... to be honest, all the fiction I've read has been an inspiration, from novels to comics to anime and films. Why? Because the fiction I write is a subversion of the mainstream fiction I've read. It's impossible for me to write...

Three chapters until the epilogue... I'm tired, my creativity is limited, time is limited, everything is limited... but I have to finish this fiction (at least volume 2 at this point). Because a good fiction is one that provides an ending.

Well... to be honest, I had a hard time visualizing your narrative in my mind at first. Why? Because you didn't provide enough atmospheric narration at the beginning. This scene is quite complicated because you start with a dream. The problem is... you immediately give the dream dialogue...

Well, let's see your narrative. Correct me if I'm wrong! it shows it. It tells it It tells it with narrative dialogue This is a telling with descriptive explanatory narrative. In general, your narrative should be a mix of show it and tell it. The principle of "show it, don't tell it" isn't...

The aliens will end up in the old mouse hole game. Trust me! Lol

Why does the scenario look like the era of western colonialism to the east?

Only 2 chapters in... be patient! Keep writing until your fiction reaches tens of chapters and is worthy of a marathon read.

Well, they'll read it, but the views will be a few. Don't expect your fiction to garner tens of thousands of views for a single short chapter. The SH algorithm relies more on visibility, meaning regular updates to a series is more likely to be seen by readers than a short story that only...

SciFi. Why? I'm not Senku. SciFi require a deep and precise grasp of science. We can't narrate SciFi without grounding it in scientific theory and its implications. The best SciFi I've ever seen is Interstellar—the scientific logic is quite precise. To me, if we truly want to write good SciFi...