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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Super top-secret, but you should know, shouldn't you?
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Everyone on this site is running on the same LLM, including myself, so I welcome AI-generated writing advice, of course.
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Gah Ignoring the cover conundrum (replaced eventually), should I expand the chapter or something to make it more eventful? I could do that by merging some parts of later chapters into it, or maybe I'd just be better off trimming it down to be more digestible I'll try to work on the grammar and...
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2035043/lastminute-monster-hunters/ boom Only three chapters (Sorry, I'm a very slow writer. The chapters aren't all that long either) but I'd appreciate any thoughts about anything at all, thanks in advance
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    AI Protection Act. Discrimination against AI

    What would u consider art then, and what distinguishes it from anime and games?
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    Special symbols you could use in your keyboards?

    SarcMark could be funny Friendly Period too
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Victory is my christmas present from this site
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    I know it's a bit hasty, but I'd like to know if I'm starting any good

    update focusing 25% of my brainpower on figuring out what to do with the cover i'll figure it out soon edit: also changed the title, if there's any time to do it now it's now
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    I am not affiliated with this person haha

    I am not affiliated with this person haha
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    I know it's a bit hasty, but I'd like to know if I'm starting any good

    Did a thing with the synopsis, trying to follow the advice I was given. Cover art problem needs a lot more brainstorming If anyone's got any advice or thoughts on the very little story content there is, I'd like to hear that too, thx
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I never ever lose
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    I know it's a bit hasty, but I'd like to know if I'm starting any good

    Ty for the responses, I’ll try and work on that synopsis today. As for the cover, that’ll take some more time because my artistic department doesn’t exist. I could always hop into paint with a bunch more PNGs Edit: As for grammar and mechanics, I do kind of suck at that. I’ll also try to...
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    I know it's a bit hasty, but I'd like to know if I'm starting any good

    This is the first story I've ever written, so it's a bit rough. I'd really appreciate any and all feedback. What am I doing okay? What am I doing poorly? What should I focus on? Is the synopsis eye-catching enough? Are the opening two chapters interesting? I know the cover image kinda sucks...
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    This is my first story, and I would like some feedback please.

    After a quick read of the prologue, u seem to be using a lot of AI assistance. It's kind of hard to judge its merit and your style if it's so AI manipulated. Even if you're not super good at english, I think it's better to put that out there instead of something that isn't wholly yours so that...
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    Who like space opera?

    I like it, will keep following along. I'm not a huge Sci-Fi guy but I've enjoyed the stuff I've read, and I can get into this kinda formula, where the villains are sorta silly. Even if it gets more serious later on, as long as it keeps this same spirit, it'll be an enjoyable read
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I've reclaimed my victory
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    Darn it

    Darn it
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    My first attempt at really writing a story I would appreciate any feedback on it (imagine it...

    My first attempt at really writing a story I would appreciate any feedback on it (imagine it hasn't been approved yet, though) The cover isn't very good but please tell me if it sucks way too much. Like, enough that I'd have to remove it
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    Good enough

    Good enough
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    I'll get a better profile picture in like five minutes

    I'll get a better profile picture in like five minutes
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