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Giving people the benefit of the doubt is always nice

AI uses a specific format in all its writing. There's the obvious recurring stuff like em dashes, the "it's not x, it's y", the groups of threes, but also some stuff I can't really put into words. But, it's easy to tell if you've ever tried to use AI for anything before in most cases Of course...

Do @Rachel_Leia_Cole and @Eldoria know each other? The former's story title has "Eldoria" in it and it's driving me a bit nuts

I have a lot of room to improve That's a positive, definitely

I'm merchandizing the fuck out of it

Take this I might be horribly mixed up, but I'm pretty sure it's a low fantasy. Only five chapters in, so there's nothing but first few chapters here

I have released more of my slop (chapter 5)

I would be lying if I said I didn't slightly forget I made this thread Chapter 1 and 2 should be merged to start. Chapter 1 is really short and provides not much hook. There's the spooky giant man, but the chapter ends on interrupted dialogue that really isn't tense enough to grab attention...

Bit of a deep cut don't you think

Redemption is costly in life

Guy with poor people skills leaves his job to become a magical startup bro but it's way suckier than expected

If I'm reading the thread, I may as well comment on it. One quick remark is that I think some of these chapters are a tad bit too short. I've heard that generally, people prefer chapters around 1.5k to 2k words in length, and these are way below that so far. The prologue is a bit absurd and I...

It'd be about what I expected

Reading The Peach of Petalik. To start off, I don't really see the point in the author's note. It gives no information that isn't in the synopsis besides the fact that the author knows what they're doing, which doesn't need to be said imo. The reader can figure that by reading First, I have...

Oh my God at long last somebody sort of liked the cover a little Thanks for the feedback, one day I'll figure out how to make Chapter 1 do more to hook ❤️

I've set out to review this, but I need to ask you first, where do I even start reading from? The first two chapters I read are seemingly disconnected short stories that take place in the same town, and upon starting the third I see it also doesn't seem connected. Is this something where these...

On chapter 10* as of now. Sophia's dad is my favorite of the sidecast definitely As for the wolf, my best guess is that he's a former werewolf that lost his humanity. One thing I'd look forward to is seeing a wider range of occult stuff, but idk if this is that sort of story

I always find myself forgetting to give my thoughts on the synopsis and cover image, so I'll write this first. Cover art is neat. Interrobang, but the synopsis does inform me well as to what to expect. Moving onto the story. Chapter 1 is a decent introduction to the main character. Her day is...

That's probably a good idea, but random people on the internet are also a solid resource I think. If I'm lucky, they'll give me a nice average reader perspective

Neat feedback thread Idk if my story is gripping enough for even an average attention span, but I will make an attempt. Only four chapters rn, so that's a plus Here you go