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Thoroughly enjoyed the prologue, especially the ending. I don't understand the bio-engineering stuff even a little bit, so I don't know how accurate it is, but it reads pretty nice. Whenever I read "Hedi Slimane" I think of that one account on TikTok and get a smile on my face. But, when we get...

That's a pretty good idea, ngl. I'm writing a chapter myself rn, so I'll close the thread from new submissions for a bit. I'll be working through this backlog at a solid rate, dw

The synopsis is definitely attention grabbing. This isn't a genre I typically read, but I think the prologue does a good job giving you some romance as a hook, though I think it could do with a bit more information on the siege conditions before we get into the tent with them. Leksa and Demyan...

Probably for it to be someone's favorite story, that'd be great

I like the cover art. Getting into the story, we're met with a really fast paced prologue. I think I'd complain that it was too fast, but it actually segues quite nicely into the protagonist "waking up" in chapter 1. But, we also pretty much immediately toss him through time after a single...

I'm a little busy rn, but I'll be free soon and I'll tend to a few more. I'm still alive

Here is the promised feedback: To start with the synopsis, it's pretty good I'd say. It does its job in giving a good idea about what to expect from the story and the kind of cast we'll have, not much to say here. I'll give my thoughts chapter by chapter before giving a sum-up. Chapter 1: It's...

I'm reading foxes' work now, after which I'll get to as much as I can Reading Princess Possession. The synopsis is okay. I feel like you could definitely do better with it, because as it stands, even though it does tell us about the story, I think it's pretty bland. Cool art, btw. As for the...

Added everything to reading library, will get to by tomorrow

Some mysterious force has turned me towards this thread I'll give my feedback sometime today :)

I suffer from blindness to all threads ever I need the links placed in front of me or I can't find them

What it says in the title I'm pretty new to this, but I think I can still be of some use I'll try to give meaningful and constructive feedback

If anyone wanted to, sure I wouldn't even mind if they didn't end up giving it the ending I would've, I think seeing their own interpetation of things would be pretty interesting

That was the first thought in my mind when I heard Archer but it just has no correlation to the hint ngl

Can anyone tell me how I'd go by removing a story's cover image, I can't figure it out for some reason

There is only one correct way and I don't need to emphasize it

I made it in time to get some urgency in polishing my chapter one, thank you Hoshino

I am winning by thinking real hard

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