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    Zirrboy's Questionaire

    I've never dropped a book or series. But I don't like smug, "stop having fun" guys. Comparable are the "git gud or gtfo" or "meta or bust" guys in video game/card game stories. But I keep one such character in my own series because I want to make a villain out of that. I want to break down...
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    How do you plan your story?

    Outline, then jot down key plotpoints that I insist must happen. List down some key lines that I really, really want to be said too. Or scenes I really want to happen. Then start working from point A to point B.
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    toasted fish

    toasted fish
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    I love Mary Sue/Gary Stu protagonist!

    You should include Tatsuya too from Mahouka. I don't feel the same level of excitement in watching Mahouka as say, Arifureta, but Tatsuya's pretty damn OP. The Kirito thing is more of the anime's fault. Plus the "lack of personality" is also the anime's fault. I agree with the above poster that...
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    Recommendations Death Games

    I enjoyed Darwin's Game Does Gleipnir count? That's pretty fun too
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    Where do you get your anime covers?

    I commission mine. Most people who don't want to do so just use Waifu Labs or just grab images from Google.
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    Sugoi

    Sugoi
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    That's actually a reason why I've been working on my art skills (I have a thread in this forum). I like to practice my writing skills and all, but the way I see it, Fractal Plane actually works better as a manga or a JRPG. The former, I can try to work on while the latter is probably close to...
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    I'm trying to take that all in, but I'm very thankful for your evaluations. You read the whole volume? Thanks a lot! I didn't expect you to finish everything. As for the pacing, I think the "orienting myself on anime instead of novels" thing was true. I framed the volume into variois segments...
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    Sunset's Art Thread?

    Time to revive this thread while I have suspended drawing in favor of writing more these past months. Character art I made in preparation for volume 4 in their raw forms. Three of them can be found in the Glossary for that volume, in fact. The only one I didn't use was for the little sister...
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    They don't even have a stable "new series" section (at least one as neat as we have here) and I...

    They don't even have a stable "new series" section (at least one as neat as we have here) and I think three or four of their sections in the front page are just SH's version of Trending but in different categories.
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    I actually think it's harder to get views over there because the site is so cluttered. A big...

    I actually think it's harder to get views over there because the site is so cluttered. A big reason why I never bothered porting over to that place.
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    How do I add a signature to my messages?

    Just click your name on the upper right corner, and you'll see a signature tab
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    Makes me crave Pizza Hut spaghetti here. I like their spaghetti and meatballs.

    Makes me crave Pizza Hut spaghetti here. I like their spaghetti and meatballs.
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    Writing Prompt Daimaou Ramen King

    Looks like a remade Hataraku, but that's not a bad thing at all. It seems unique enough from the get-go anyway.
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    Where's that care react that's in Facebook? Need one for this status right now

    Where's that care react that's in Facebook? Need one for this status right now
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    You can also use Date a Live as reference. Persona 4 too if we're going video games. People have also compared it to 11eyes if you're familiar. Technically, I wrote the story structure like a set of JRPG arcs so if you're familiar with those, it could help. I don't think I'll want to make it...
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    Consider me impressed. How familiar are you with modern anime? Because it will go a long way in making the process smoother. You'll have an easier time in giving feedback and I'll get something closer to what I want. I'd like to have my first volume checked out too. It's in my sig, and if...
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    How important is a cover?

    Well, I put the most effort in presentation (covers, glossary character profiles, omake chapters, art) in my series, so I'm going to say yes.
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    Dump your abandoned story ideas here

    Well, I first tried fiddling around writing a full story by myself in 2017. In the 2017 version of Fractal Plane (I don't even remember what it's called lol), I tried messing with the idea of pseudo-time travel or super acceleration (ala Accel World). Turns out having the entire world freeze in...
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