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I guess this is something of the future that will soon be arriving on everyone's doorsteps. Everything will be "AI" because some humans can't think for themselves and think others can't either. However, trolls will be trolls. Take pride in what you make and ignore the ones lacking brain cells...

My friend, you have unlocked a new addiction! A good one!:blob_aww:

Liked it. Thought of sharing it~ Maybe it will inspire someone with an epic battle scene~

Try all the foods in the world and more!

I see! I don't know if that's possible as I tend to show the character's emotional sides. In this case, it was her despair and hopelessness. It's what makes me absorbed in the stories. But I do get what you mean! I'm unsure how to do a running start without showing her emotional state. I tend...

I understand now! Thank you for elaborating; I was very concerned! Yes, there are tropes that I use that may not be the cup of tea of others. It's like action-packed stories; I don't read them because they aren't my type of story! :sweating_profusely: I understand what you're saying. I'll keep...

Sure! And hm... I didn't think of this as a backstory or prologue more than an origin, as this led to her being in another world. I didn't expose any info dump other than what the scene was taking. I wanted to show the disturbed mind of someone suffering from survivor's guilt. Someone who was...

Darkness is for me!

More than once?!:blob_pat_sad:

@SailusGebel You have devolved this feedback post into a discussion on Yeti Senpai! What do you have to say for yourself?! You can't hide from me! I know what you look like!

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Keep writing! That's the only way to get better! That said, describe what your characters are doing while they talk! We don't simply say something without expressing some type of body language! Also, I'm gonna link something that helped me a lot when all I typed was said. Different ways to say Said

You are an indecisive Yeti! :blob_no:

Do you want me to call you Senpai? Make up your mind, Yeti, of the snowy mountains!

You hated me calling you Senpai, so Yeti it is! :blob_aww:

I'm sorry, but I don't understand what you want me to answer. :blob_pat_sad: If you want to avoid social issues just don't mention them. Humans are a race; there is nothing wrong with them being targeted for being humans. Their age doesn't matter either. Picked chosen aren't an issue either...