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  1. KoyukiMegumi

    Need Constructive or Yeti Style Criticism Part 2

    Thank you, Jonny! I'll keep that in mind! :blob_aww:
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    Oversimplified

    Petty gods couldn't share and ended up in war over a book.
  3. KoyukiMegumi

    Need Constructive or Yeti Style Criticism Part 2

    Hah! They tell me I write sentences that are too simple and then too complex! I can't make anyone happy! :blob_no: (I understand where you're coming from!) I'm a nurse so sometimes those fancy medical terms words slip by! I see hm... In this case, she thinks she might've broken ribs because...
  4. KoyukiMegumi

    How many chapters did you stack before posting?

    :sweating_profusely: Hahah, I'm going that same road. Wallet feels lighter, but the juicy anime boys!:blob_aww:~ Shame, BL makes me drool, too, maybe I'll give your stories a shot. The only thing I can't read is GL.:blob_no:
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    How many chapters did you stack before posting?

    :blob_aww: Thank you so much! It's all thanks to the glorious @Thorkell_40k !
  6. KoyukiMegumi

    How many chapters did you stack before posting?

    Or break you! :blobspearpeek:
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    @Corty A salmon-pink Yeit? [IMG]

    @Corty A salmon-pink Yeit?
  8. KoyukiMegumi

    How many chapters did you stack before posting?

    I tend to write the entire novel before I publish it. But, uh 5, would that be doable?
  9. KoyukiMegumi

    Hiatus?

    Inform your readers. No one likes a hiatus that came out of nowhere.
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    [IMG] He evolved!

    He evolved!
  11. KoyukiMegumi

    What do you do with your characters and/or which one do you like

    1/2/3/4/5 All the above! I like to make my characters suffer crushing trauma and then bring them to a happy ending with self-healing! Some may just live in trauma and see it as a normal day! Haha!
  12. KoyukiMegumi

    Nightmare Triggers

    Dreams are all triggered by subconscious thoughts you may have had today or a few days ago. Something that made an impression gets twisted into your dream. It could've been a fluffy bunny, but your psyche makes it into a demonic monster trying to hunt you down. In your case, your fear of doors...
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    Yush! I know, Yeti! Thank you! But I love my stories so much that they deserve the extra care...

    Yush! I know, Yeti! Thank you! But I love my stories so much that they deserve the extra care! :blob_aww: This will be the last pass I do in a long time!
  14. KoyukiMegumi

    Since I got my feedback for my chapters, I've been going back and writing in so much detail into...

    Since I got my feedback for my chapters, I've been going back and writing in so much detail into my story. I didn't know it lacked so much without others pointing it out! Again, thank you, everyone, for making me a better writer. :blob_aww: Ten released chapters are done, and 18 to go! I can...
  15. KoyukiMegumi

    I would like to ask your opinion on the sex scene in the novel draft.

    Not a fan of plain sex/porn. There is not much else going on there; you should make those dialogue paragraphs less heavy by breaking them apart. Cell phone users may see that and run. Maybe use different things to call genitalia, making it more appealing and flowery. Then again, this is the...
  16. KoyukiMegumi

    Need Constructive or Yeti Style Criticism Part 2

    I understand, hm... I might move some stuff around before I release shadows! I think I understand what you mean. c: Thank you, Blob! You've been very helpful! :blob_aww:I'll just start with them falling since MC's hostility toward the goddess already shows her state of mind. Hm, yup! I got a lot...
  17. KoyukiMegumi

    Need Constructive or Yeti Style Criticism Part 2

    Take your time! :blob_sir: I meant more for the question.:blob_aww: She is basically teleported in front of the goddess who grants her power. So, it was the start of the Iseka. I guess? This is the first time I have written Iseka. I'm currently writing another, too, but that one chapter 1 is...
  18. KoyukiMegumi

    Need Constructive or Yeti Style Criticism Part 2

    @greyblob Ya left me hanging here in suspense! :blob_teary: Momoi? :blob_sir: I am sophisticated enough to admit I don't know what you mean!
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