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  1. MakBow

    I'm SouthernMaiden, looking to give some Story Feedback while sick with the Flu [Now Closed]

    Yes, it indeed was inspired by Failure Frame and thank you for the feedback
  2. MakBow

    Villian Origin Story Novels

    I'm not comparing my story to shadow slave, but rather the idea that the tag shows up much after. Don't add words to something I didn't say. And no, I do make it clear in the title, although it is vague as well mentioned ideas of revenge and misfortune.
  3. MakBow

    Villian Origin Story Novels

    The tags are never going to change at a certain point. They stay there as they are. In Shadow Slave, romance isn't present for a LONG time, but it does pop up eventually. It's the same thing here. Certain aspects will appear rather early or later and at the beginning. And he's not a villain at...
  4. MakBow

    My Power System(s)

    [Power System #1: Staitus System] (Restricted only to the Summoned Humans in my Novel) The ‘Staitus System’ (Status System) is a system modeled after the game stats of games, created by the goddess, formed by the enslaved spirits the goddess possessed, meant to measure the capabilities (Stats)...
  5. MakBow

    I'm SouthernMaiden, looking to give some Story Feedback while sick with the Flu [Now Closed]

    You already helped me once soooooooo... Novel: Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything Using the [Cursed Hand] | Scribble Hub For the cover, you won't need to bother. I'm not good at art and broke so I just used Canvas to make a cover
  6. MakBow

    Villian Origin Story Novels

    What are you talking about? Those are the correct tags. You may not see them now, but they will appear.
  7. MakBow

    Villian Origin Story Novels

    And I am fine that. my MC is going to do things that will make some people see him as the hero, but others will see him as the villain. The problem is that there is usually no moral ambiguity or no questioning. Example: An MC nukes an entire city for world domination per the way of his country...
  8. MakBow

    Villian Origin Story Novels

    I have no idea what that is.
  9. MakBow

    Villian Origin Story Novels

    I notice that I've never really seen a villain origin story novel unless I just suck at exploration. I know there are things like Overlord, where the MC transmigrated into the villain role and they adapt to that role, but I've never seen an actual MC start off decent, neutral, or good but...
  10. MakBow

    I need advice on narration

    I would say it depends on how you structure it, at least for me. You could just have your MC describe everything as they see it and that would make it fine. Like you said, just make the narrator sound like your MC. Or you can make sure that you signal that a narration change is happening from...
  11. MakBow

    Character Descriptions (How to Do It Properly?) (Ignore)

    What do you think? Revised Emerging from the light was a spirit. (Should have added this line for a little more context) A strange creature she was, a gremlin I would say, petite and adorable. Her skin white, the octopus tentacles that were her hair moving around, multi-colored, curling...
  12. MakBow

    Character Descriptions (How to Do It Properly?) (Ignore)

    I have no actual understanding of how to do a character description to their look, and I feel as if I'm either under-doing it or overdoing it. Example of Mine She was quite a strange creature, giving me the view of a gremlin. White skin with hair as octopus tentacles, starting as...
  13. MakBow

    How Does Your MC Wipe Their Ass?

    With multiple rolls. Gotta get every chunk.
  14. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    Yeah, they do sometimes (Redo of Healer), but I have zero intention of doing that. Mine is small, simple, and straight-forward. No unnecessary violence, no shock-value grape
  15. MakBow

    Synopsis

    Synopsis Kuroha Kuroyami, commonly called Kuro, a young man who had always lived a life of misfortune, would be summoned by the Goddess Shumato, along with three other people to serve as heroes for the world in a fight against the demons. While the other three would be gifted with exception...
  16. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    1. For my world, his life isn't really better since despite having friends, the trauma and vague understandings of his torture still drive him as he wants to know why it happened. 2. There's no group, it's just a villainess who took captured a guy because of her paranoia as well as all the...
  17. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    1. The revenge will happen near the end of the novel 2. My protagonist will suffer, even after escaping his captor 3. I would never fall for that. I already have everything set up for who dies and who doesn't. 4. By the second chapter he has a partner. He has no intention of spreading his own...
  18. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    Yes, while revenge is the goal, it's not like its his only goal. He does want to know why she did what she did, why she tortured him endlessly for having a power he thought was good, why she thought it was a good idea to sexually abuse him and r#pe him and have him graped by others, why she...
  19. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    Yeah, I have no intention of stretching the story beyond what it needs to be. I already have every character needed for the story and planned out. How they get introduced is what I just go crazy on, nearly all the necessary layers have been added for my revenge novel and after that, it's just...
  20. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    What do you think of revenge novels? I'm writing a revenge novel currently (Two at the moment, one is posted yet) (Don't ask why) I want to know what you think is the biggest disappointment in a revenge novel. I want to make sure my revenge novel actually works for what it does. I do intend...
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