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Tell me what you think about this prologue. The concept is meant to be for an isekai where the main character has extreme misfortune. (Not it isn't a comedy novel, but a revenge one.) (This does get transfer along with him in the new world) (To give you a simple idea: I'm essentially doing...

Here's an improvised version: General Idea The MC, named Abadu, is a weak guy who was bedridden for a long time once he reached 7, plagued by the curse of a witch from the original world he came from, being the reincarnation of the Calamity King, an ancient, trans-dimensional being capable of...

I guess the main premise I was thinking of is how the MC lives with this absurd power, trying to hold it back while acting living a life that he's always wanted, that escapism and how he wanted to run away from his problems. You are right that it is doomed BL as the MC is forced to confront...

The MC is a weak guy with a weak body due to a curse from another world (unknown to him) because a witch knew he was the reincarnation of the Calamity King, a powerful being that destroys everything around him and in his bed, he reads a novel, talking about how he wants to be in a fantasy world...

Question 1: What is the minimal chapter count that is most preferred or/and the maximum if there is any for a reader? I notice that my chapters often have a word count of around 2000 - 3500, maybe more as I often write until I feel like it's a good time to end the chapter and I write multiple...

I actually do make somewhat of reference to this in the first chapter and how my character things of them. How they are seen as monuments of nature and they are grown everywhere in nature. You are right in the fact that if you are nearby Eldeblooms, you get a sort of extra storage and able to...

Without a class, you can learn various magics faster, but with a class, you accel at one field, but are much slower than average with others 1. No, there's still magic in your body. It's just that the recharge rate is slower or just outright stops in areas with little Eldeblooms or none 2. Those...

- You are born with a class; I already mentioned that (Rare talents that are given at birth) - It depends on how you use your magic or if you have a class, how you use your class. Nothing is a clear indicator of your strength unless its widely explosion or extremely versatile. (Having a class...

There indeed are some limits that will be addressed in the story itself, such as: - It's a lot harder to learn other forms of magic and skills when you have a class and those without a class can learn them a lot easier, depending on what the class is - Not being around Eldeblooms, flowers that...

So, I want to know if this is a good enough magic system. It's already in effect, but at the current moment in the story, I haven't really exposed the full roster and capabilities of it, so I can still technically edit it before all of it is exposed Magic System #1: Eldeblooms Mana comes from...

I know, I would just delete them, but I don't know how. I guess I'm just desperate as this is a novel I really want to get out there. This is going to be my last one anyway.

I want to know if I'm doing this well for a revenge novel as I want to use trashy elements from typical revenge novels and actually make them good. I'm not trying to reinvent but rather take trash or mid fun novels (Failure Frame, Redo of Healer for example) and use their elements to make a good...

Read the first following chapters and tell me what you think. It's a novel that is inspired by Redo of Healer, Failure Frame, The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic, and other series and games. I followed, you guessed it, an actual support healer (not the 'healing' that Keyaru does) with a similar...

Oh, don't worry! By no means is it that rape, torture porn, stuff. It's more so a small inspiration for my own world, like the fact my main character is a healer and is out for revenge. He's not going to do any of that stuff. I couldn't even write that weird that stuff if I tried, I suck at...

In short, this is more of a hobby novel I'm posting alongside my main novel as it allows me to keep my mind fresh (for some reason), but I would still like criticism as it's more of me taking Redo of Healer, Failure Frame, Sentenced to be Hero, and The Wrong Way to Use Healing Magic as my...

I know, I know. I take the full blame for that. I'm already rewriting it to make it better and more detailed, as well as adding in a bit more characterization for my character before the main story.

What are you talking about? No, I did not leave it worse intentionally for edit suggestions. There were no grammar errors. I merely stated that I was short-sighted to not put as much effort in the prologue as I did for the future chapters, believing that I had did enough, when I didn't since I...

I I can total understand what you mean. I really just wrote with the idea it was only a prologue, so I didn't bother going much in detail. I'll admit that. That's why I went way more in detail in the actual first chapter and beyond. I went in with the fact it was a true first impression, but...

I want to full truth and nothing but the full truth. I want nothing to be held back so yes, 'Most Critic'.

Can someone tell me what they think of the first chapters of my novel? Honest criticism and praise please. Link: Re:Start – To Conquer The Stars As The Evil Lord | Scribble Hub