Eldoria

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  Eldoria

• Today at 12:06 AM

Good shock value should make the reader feel like, "D*mt it! He did that crazy thing?! I totally missed the hint in the first chapter."

Not like, "Why did he suddenly do this crazy thing?! There was no hint, he was always portrayed as kind."

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  Eldoria

• Yesterday at 3:19 AM

Sighed. I took off my cone-shaped hat, shook out my white hair. A burn sensation spread across my cheeks. The scent of sweat hit my nose.

I stood in the middle of the grassland, looked up. The white light dazzled my vision.

Hmm... maybe Mr Sun was angry.

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  CinnaSloth

• Monday at 9:20 PM

From Sweetest breath from thee, my princess queen, Eldoria
Like honey seas, and sugar treats of small and mass euphoria
With violet eyes and vibrant hair as beautiful Alliaria
A kiss I ask from thee, or three, or i might not believe, you see
For I am the very model of demoness hysteria.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Monday at 10:55 AM

Do not fret, the Odyssey, one of the greatest literary works of Western culture, also looks back at what had happened.

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  Eldoria

• Monday at 10:04 AM

An example of a review from an editor posing as a casual reader.

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  Eldoria

• Monday at 8:48 AM

I thank an admin for finally removing one of the 'weird fiction' recommendations on my fiction page. Now... I can look at my fiction homepage without feeling weird about seeing it in a similar series.

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  Eldoria

• Sunday at 1:51 PM

What do you think about the combination of these 3 genres in 1 work: dark fantasy + psychological + tragedy?

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  AstreiaNyx

• Sunday at 12:33 PM

You’ve been pouting a lot lately. Must be tough being a magical girl.

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  Akkizakura

• Sunday at 11:58 AM

Have you ever heard of Magical Girl Minky Momo?

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  Anemic_Vampire

• Sunday at 11:18 AM

she never threatened to disembowel me

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I didn't realize that was possible.

Is disembowel something like vowel? Or is it meant to be pronounced ‘dish em bowl’?

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  Eldoria

• Sunday at 5:14 AM

It's sunday. It's time for a bath.

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  Eldoria

• Saturday at 3:46 PM

Hmm... I just realized my writing style tends to be atmospheric, simbolic and emotional. That's why I find it difficult to write comedy scenes that are purely entertaining.

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  Bimbanana

• Saturday at 12:03 PM

TADAAAAA

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  CinnaSloth

• Saturday at 2:24 AM

kith?

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  Rosica

• Thursday at 2:56 AM

I figured out how to be a @Macha clone. Just keep making Mpreg jokes.

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  Eldoria

• Thursday at 1:10 AM

To anyone who claims to be asking for honest feedback, please be honest with yourself.

Don't say you're asking for feedback if you don't even appreciate the reviewer's time and thought for your work. Reviewers are human beings, too, and ignoring them as if they don't exist will only hurt them.

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  Assurbanipal_II

• Apr 15, 2026

New member~

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  Eldoria

• Apr 15, 2026

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  Eldoria

• Apr 15, 2026

You know... why the sky rains when a character cries over the loss of a loved one. Or how the wind often ruffles characters' hair when they're indecisive (just look at the Pain vs. Naruto scene about the cycle of hatred). It's a dramatization technique of showing emotion through atmosphere.

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  Eldoria

• Apr 14, 2026

The sky was crying...