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    [IMG] Captain Reynard the Idealistic Knight

    Captain Reynard the Idealistic Knight
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    Recommendations Can you recommend one fiction title that sticks out in your mind after reading it many years ago?

    I've been reading it since the web novel. And now the LN is finished. The final fight scene made me laugh and cry at the same time.
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    I didn't know how to react. The beginning of the post... I wanted to give a loving reaction. But...

    I didn't know how to react. The beginning of the post... I wanted to give a loving reaction. But when I read the ending, I laughed bitterly.
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    Feedback for Handling Sensitive Content

    Thank you for your honest feedback. :blob_salute: :blob_aww: Thematic depth is related to the issues raised in the fiction that drive the plot. For example, idealism vs. realism, personal love vs. chivalrous duty, war vs. morality, etc. Thematic depth can vary from fiction to fiction. This...
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    Fighting sequence against 'Mini-Boss'

    This is indeed an experience. Anyone can read Deep POV theory, but not necessarily apply it precisely. You need to write and edit more. Don't hesitate to read great works to broaden your experience and vocabulary. Cheers!:blob_hug:
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    Fighting sequence against 'Mini-Boss'

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    @Tsuru I'd like to quote @Nevafrost her statement yesterday... it went something like this (if I...

    @Tsuru I'd like to quote @Nevafrost her statement yesterday... it went something like this (if I remember correctly): SHF members each have their unique personalities, and sometimes we just need to empathize with their characters. Of course, there are exceptions, especially those who are truly...
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    Don't get me wrong! I respect Alice as a whole person. She's quite nice. She's quite funny, even...

    Don't get me wrong! I respect Alice as a whole person. She's quite nice. She's quite funny, even a little cute (if you look at how cheerful she is). She's generous enough to give her time and attention to give feedback to a stranger like me. In real life, she's still nicer than people who I've...
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    But I held back, sighed, and tried to empathize. That's just the way Alice is. She just likes to...

    But I held back, sighed, and tried to empathize. That's just the way Alice is. She just likes to joke (too much). She's not very good at responding to situations (or reading the minds of her conversation partners). I see the fictional zombie apocalypse diary book as reflecting some of her...
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    I felt uncomfortable when Alice laughed at my feedback and then laughed back just because I used...

    I felt uncomfortable when Alice laughed at my feedback and then laughed back just because I used onomatopoeia for a heavy and emotional narrative. It felt like someone was mocking your work despite your best efforts. Honestly, it was annoying... a sensitive member like me might be offended.
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    @Tsuru I guess... it's just that I get annoyed when people use the wrong emoji (especially the...

    @Tsuru I guess... it's just that I get annoyed when people use the wrong emoji (especially the laughing emoji) to respond to inappropriate situations. But I'm not only ones.
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    Feedback for Handling Sensitive Content

    Thank you for your honest feedback. :blob_salute: :blob_aww: Thank you for your honest feedback. :blob_salute: :blob_aww:
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    You can read it when you're in a good mood; this chapter is quite sensitive. It's not recommended for readers who are not mentally prepared.
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    If you'd like, please read my feedback thread. I'd love to hear your honest thoughts. All you have to do is answer four questions after reading a chapter. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/feedback-for-handling-sensitive-content.27304/
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    It's pretty good. The narrative has avoided the white space syndrome. But I still have a hard time visualizing Zerra's fight scenes against the enemy because the visualization of Zerra's appearance is limited (they're demons, after all, right?). And the transition between Zerra and Aegis's...
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