When the law is dead, I become the law. Blood for blood. Forgiveness belongs only to the victims! — Blood Rose Princess
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Good shock value should make the reader feel like, "D*mt it! He did that crazy thing?! I totally missed the hint in the first chapter."
Not like, "Why did he suddenly do this crazy thing?! There was no hint, he was always portrayed as kind."
Sighed. I took off my cone-shaped hat, shook out my white hair. A burn sensation spread across my cheeks. The scent of sweat hit my nose.
I stood in the middle of the grassland, looked up. The white light dazzled my vision.
Hmm... maybe Mr Sun was angry.
From Sweetest breath from thee, my princess queen, Eldoria
Like honey seas, and sugar treats of small and mass euphoria
With violet eyes and vibrant hair as beautiful Alliaria
A kiss I ask from thee, or three, or i might not believe, you see
For I am the very model of demoness hysteria.
Do not fret, the Odyssey, one of the greatest literary works of Western culture, also looks back at what had happened.
An example of a review from an editor posing as a casual reader.
I thank an admin for finally removing one of the 'weird fiction' recommendations on my fiction page. Now... I can look at my fiction homepage without feeling weird about seeing it in a similar series.
What do you think about the combination of these 3 genres in 1 work: dark fantasy + psychological + tragedy?
You’ve been pouting a lot lately. Must be tough being a magical girl.
Have you ever heard of Magical Girl Minky Momo?
I didn't realize that was possible.
Is disembowel something like vowel? Or is it meant to be pronounced ‘dish em bowl’?
It's sunday. It's time for a bath.
Hmm... I just realized my writing style tends to be atmospheric, simbolic and emotional. That's why I find it difficult to write comedy scenes that are purely entertaining.
TADAAAAA
kith?
To anyone who claims to be asking for honest feedback, please be honest with yourself.
Don't say you're asking for feedback if you don't even appreciate the reviewer's time and thought for your work. Reviewers are human beings, too, and ignoring them as if they don't exist will only hurt them.
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You know... why the sky rains when a character cries over the loss of a loved one. Or how the wind often ruffles characters' hair when they're indecisive (just look at the Pain vs. Naruto scene about the cycle of hatred). It's a dramatization technique of showing emotion through atmosphere. -
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