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HerbivorePapi
“HiDE, Aoi!” Chapter 3 “Alien Superstar” now live!
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HiDE, Aoi!

“HiDE, Aoi!” is a QUEER fantasy-adventure — A love story! Dedicated to my life, but way cooler because it has magic! Each setting, character, spell, joke, thought…word, holds the entire weight of my life… …The world outside, a poor, diluted imitation, moves at breakneck speed. There’s no safe...
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Agentt
Dear...
@.@)
*drags @sleepandeatallday here too*

I think...

I think I finally have enough material to write a whole book. I finally wrote enough content.

A whole book! With an ending!
Jun_Sakazuki
I just changed my new chapter to draft cause I accidentally posted it because I want to post at different time so when I post it again would It appear on the home page or no?
Assurbanipal_II
:blob_aww: Do not fret, the Odyssey, one of the greatest literary works of Western culture, also looks back at what had happened.
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JayMark
JayMark
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JayMark
JayMark
I tend to block out anything that makes a narrative less interesting to me. If you tell me the end, my brain erases it automagically. Unless it's really vague, I didn't mind the little statement at the start of Boku no Hero.
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JayMark
JayMark
There were so many characters and such scale there were unlimited possible outcomes for what the ending would look like.
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ShrimpShady
As the larper that I am, I've never watched or read Dungeon Meshi, so can someone tell me

Do they butcher and eat sentient creatures over there?
Macha
Macha
Macha
Macha
SRB
SRB
Tell me that she's just encased in some magical jelly or something please
Eldoria

An example of a review from an editor posing as a casual reader. :blob_melt:
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Eldoria
Eldoria
Well, plot armor has long been a point of criticism among literary critics. This trope makes the story predictable and the world seems to serve (revolve around) MC. But of course, that's beyond the scope of the review above.
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Eldoria
Furthermore, several famous authors have tried to avoid plot armor. One way is by creating multiple protagonists who could die at any time.

A Song of Fire and Ice is a famous example, and one reason why this fiction is hated.

We also have an anti-plot armor writer here, for example @MFontana
MFontana
MFontana
Guilty as charged.
Primarily on account of the genre I do most of my writing in (Dark-Fantasy), and in how it is incorporated into some stories (IE: Dragonball) to the point that there are zero lasting consequences, and the same exact formula is repeated arc after arc.
As far as I'm concerned, if you've got lasting consequences, and sustained dramatic tension, you're working without plot armor
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I thank an admin for finally removing one of the 'weird fiction' recommendations on my fiction page. Now... I can look at my fiction homepage without feeling weird about seeing it in a similar series. :blob_melt:
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Eldoria
Eldoria
Very strange... imagine you see a gentle mother hugging her little daughter. A wholesome and heartwarming sight.

But when you turn to the other side, you see a half-naked woman.

How would you feel about this inconsistency?
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