Got a 4 star review from someone who didn't like my story. It was a nice review, and they said they thought the writing was good. However, the story was not their cup of tea.
Certain cloud trees have been documented loudly encouraging neighboring trees to endure harsh winds and falling debris without complaint. However, these same specimens emit high vocalizations of distress at even the gentlest of breezes against their bark.
Researchers suspect the resilience may function primarily in one direction.
May all selfish evil corporation who claim they have made their product better but really just switched to cheaper alternatives go bankrupt! This is my curse!!!!! I curse them!
After everything that happened, I just want to remind you that you're loved. Even if your paycheck doesn't have an extra zero, or your schedule lacks a few free days.
I think outside of a grammar checker, or having a friend look at it, the best free recourse for editing is a screen reader. That way you can hear your story and catch awkward phrasing and the like. Of course you can read it aloud yourself, but for longer works, that is more work than necessary imo.
AI ‘enhanced’ writing is such a slog to get through. It treats every moment as a 11 yet its descriptions and prose are quite average. Every moment is the most important moment a sentence becomes twice as long, or multiple sentences. With frivolous ornamentation that make its writing seem purple if not for how bland its prose is.
q log #177: you wake up, to see a slime looming over you. "Taxes? Transphobia? Humans? What are you talking about? Its a lovely day for us monsters to frolic among the animals and plants on this otherwise uninhabited planet, come, join us, we were about to start the dance competition!"


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