A Professional Inappropriate Question

[DarkCrinkle]

My inspiration from writing smut scenes ? H*ntai ?

Mostly, I picture out the scenes first and try to understand how each character feels in their perspective like getting into their shoes kinda vision. But I am a visual learner type of guy, soooo... it depends on you if prefer to read to visualize.

 

[PurpleXanmal]

Honestly, I probably don't have much of a say since most of my stuff is between humans. Technically NPC girls sort of? But I'd say it depends on two things.

Perspective and placement. The average sex scenes from a feminine perspective os less physicaly and far more emotional and sensual. It's not D slide into P. It's thrusting, warmth, pleasure, the 5 senses of ducking so to speak.

For men, you lean heavily into the physical aspect and the joy from the act. Thr craving for the body and wanting tk explore every inch. The control you hold over the person (if dominant).

 

[Bimbanana]

I see..

So basically its just like studying your partner.
What your characters like or dislikes, fave positions, sex fantasy, sensitive spots, etc huh

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Carefully, with condom. Haven't had a threesome or foursome since I had a kid, though.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

Had a girlfriend who was into that stuff, found out I could write, and coerced me into writing it, with feedback on what worked and what didn't.
Also read a few chapters in some of the "Steamy Harlequin Romance" novels my wife had laying around before we shipped a lot of books off to the donation bins.

 

[GwynLordofTinder]

I see..

So basically its just like studying your partner.
What your characters like or dislikes, fave positions, sex fantasy, sensitive spots, etc huh

Oh, definitely give your characters distinct prefernences, fetishes, endurance levels. Have the perspective character realize what those are and play with them.

 

[Anonjohn20]

How the heck did you get the inspiration for your... "action" scene?

Like how do you make one tentacles scene feel more special than the other tentacles scene?

Erotic scenes are essentially a combination of an action scene and a romance scene. You have to try and focus both an what the character is doing and what he or she is feeling. If you can express the characters' feelings, then you should succeed. Which is why the best erotic authors usually have experience with non-erotic romance and/or drama too.

This is the closest thing to smut that i ever write. I pretty much enjoy writing it tbh, but need to stop it because its comedy.

Spoiler: Closest thing

“Honey, I’m home,” Solo said, already peeling off his suit jacket.

“Ugh… today turned into a disaster,” he muttered, loosening his tie, then his shirt. “A complete disaster.”

He collapsed onto the bed face-first, landing like a fallen log.

“The Celeste and the elves are allying,” he groaned into the mattress. “Can you believe that? The judgmental elves! And the judgmental humans! Together? Judging what?!”

Silence.

Solo lifted his head slightly.

“Lilith, honey?” He sat up and looked around. “Are you in the bathroom?”

He raised his voice. “Are you still feeling sick?”

For a moment, nothing happened.

Then—

The bathroom door opened.
Slowly.
Dramatically.

A silhouette appeared. A woman’s silhouette. A very deliberate silhouette.

Lilith stepped out.

She stood in the doorway in a confident, dangerous pose, wearing lingerie that clearly violated the parental guidance rule.

“Yes,” she said, her voice low, slow, and dangerously smooth,
“I’m still sick.”

Solo blinked.

“Sick of waiting,” Lilith continued, her eyes glowing faintly,
“for a naughty orc… who made me wait… all… night… long…”

She began walking toward the bed.

Slowly.
Sensually.
Unnecessarily slowly.

Solo swallowed.

When she reached the bed, she didn’t sit beside him.

No.

She deliberately landed on the farthest side, then turned and began crawling toward him like a cat stalking prey. A very smug, very confident cat.

“Honey… wow…” Solo muttered, his brain visibly lagging behind the situation. “What’s the occasion?”

“Occasion?” Lilith said, pushing a hand against his chest.

Not gently.
Not weakly.
Just enough force to remind him she was max-level demon and he was… not.

“Ooff!” Solo was pressed back onto the mattress.

“Like the little piggies occasion?” Lilith whispered, climbing over him.

Her fingers touched his chest.

“This little piggy had an occasion to go to market…”

Her fingers walked downward, very deliberately.

“And this little piggy went home…”

The fingers kept walking.

“This little piggy had a roast beef…”

Dangerously low now.

“And this little piggy went—”

Solo gulped.

“Wee, wee, wee, all the way home.”

The piggy reached their destination. Solo’s soul briefly left his body and returned because of professionalism.

“U-uh, honey,” he said quickly, sweating. “I really appreciate this but… can we do this tomorrow?”

Lilith froze.

“I have a super early meeting with our ambassador,” Solo rushed on. “She was just kicked out from Elvandar and—”

Then—

“WHAT?!” Lilith snapped, “BAD PIGGY!”

“GYAAAH—DON’T SQUEEZE!” Solo screamed, suddenly discovering new octaves in his voice.

.....it feels like you want to tell me something else

Okay, you did well on the action/seduction; you could do more on the emotions. How did the orc feel when he saw Lilith? All we got was that he blinked and later gulped. Did he feel tempted, inconvenienced, insecure, exhausted, giddy, etc.? How did Lilith feel when he asked for a rain check? Was she slightly upset that he'd try and prioritize something else, was she filled with determination to double down on the seduction, was she excited he was playing hard to get and eager to play a game, etc.?

 

[Makimaam]

I would advise reading more erotica, though most of what I’ve read has left me raising an unimpressed eyebrow.

 

[Sylver]

My inspiration from writing smut scenes ? H*ntai ?

Mostly, I picture out the scenes first and try to understand how each character feels in their perspective like getting into their shoes kinda vision. But I am a visual learner type of guy, soooo... it depends on you if prefer to read to visualize.

You get credit for honesty, and I'll award you a cookie if you're brave enough to share the name of said H*ntai

 

[Ellie_in_Pink]

Hm ... how to put this ... delicately.

Instead of internet-based titillation, staying up at night making up exciting scenarios in my head for what I would like to happen. In great detail. After that, just put in on the page. You'll never write good smut by just trying to imitate or fill a check box list of things. You have to figure out the stories that make you feel excitement. Then put THAT on the page. If you don't enjoy writing it, if it's not better than "corn" for you, then nobody else will either.

 

[TASTYLEADPAINT]

Rule 34 and hentai. And being a degenarate gooner. Are a great place to start

 

[AliceMoonvale]

So, this is thread is essentially exposing all the degenerate porn/hentai addicts.
Good to know for future reference.

 

[YukieSama]

his girlfriend is a tentacle fetishist who wants him to try and wear her like a finger puppet.

First person in my bloodline to read that sentence.

 

[CharlesEBrown]

So, this is thread is essentially exposing all the degenerate porn/hentai addicts.
Good to know for future reference.

Or for those who DATED them... well, a Black Rose Society member, at least (they were one of the primary references used for the Fifty Shades books)...

 

[GwynLordofTinder]

First person in my bloodline to read that sentence.

Not the last though, my Grim Works shall live forever

 

[Bimbanana]

Had a girlfriend who was into that stuff, found out I could write, and coerced me into writing it, with feedback on what worked and what didn't.
Also read a few chapters in some of the "Steamy Harlequin Romance" novels my wife had laying around before we shipped a lot of books off to the donation bins.

I definitely hope that donation doesnt goes to an orphanage

Erotic scenes are essentially a combination of an action scene and a romance scene. You have to try and focus both an what the character is doing and what he or she is feeling. If you can express the characters' feelings, then you should succeed. Which is why the best erotic authors usually have experience with non-erotic romance and/or drama too.



Okay, you did well on the action/seduction; you could do more on the emotions. How did the orc feel when he saw Lilith? All we got was that he blinked and later gulped. Did he feel tempted, inconvenienced, insecure, exhausted, giddy, etc.? How did Lilith feel when he asked for a rain check? Was she slightly upset that he'd try and prioritize something else, was she filled with determination to double down on the seduction, was she excited he was playing hard to get and eager to play a game, etc.?

Wow, I never knew that you can be this... educated

So, this is thread is essentially exposing all the degenerate porn/hentai addicts.
Good to know for future reference.

Shhhh, i just trying to liberate the peeps

 

[Sylver]

Erotic scenes are essentially a combination of an action scene and a romance scene. You have to try and focus both an what the character is doing and what he or she is feeling. If you can express the characters' feelings, then you should succeed. Which is why the best erotic authors usually have experience with non-erotic romance and/or drama too.



Okay, you did well on the action/seduction; you could do more on the emotions. How did the orc feel when he saw Lilith? All we got was that he blinked and later gulped. Did he feel tempted, inconvenienced, insecure, exhausted, giddy, etc.? How did Lilith feel when he asked for a rain check? Was she slightly upset that he'd try and prioritize something else, was she filled with determination to double down on the seduction, was she excited he was playing hard to get and eager to play a game, etc.?

Well said

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I definitely hope that donation doesnt goes to an orphanage

Not sure where it goes to now - used to go to a used book store chain, but they went out of business during or just before COVID and the state took over.

 

[Bimbanana]

Not sure where it goes to now - used to go to a used book store chain, but they went out of business during or just before COVID and the state took over.

Aah

 

[Sylver]

So, this is thread is essentially exposing all the degenerate porn/hentai addicts.
Good to know for future reference.

I write an action adventure fantasy with lots of cat girl smut, I've got nothing to hide