thank you very much. those comments really show me the path and i will definitely try to improve as much i can .
before improving the basics i wont upload .??
But i won't stop writing though i must completely write what i have in my mind.
isn't there any comment section on novel.. or you give me feedback here ..
after taking screenshot your feedback i will thoroughly review my novel and try to make up for the shortcomings.
thank you . And forget about friends and classmate i shall look for someone in the online.
where i live writing novel or something isn't popular and if they know it will be a social death.