Wet dream : I am the best author

[Deleted member 54065]

he is lusting over someone's Gund(Asshole)

Anyway, sorry for hacking your thread. How about this? As an apology, I'll beta read your work?

I'll comment on the technicalities and anything else you might want to know.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

Prolly that, and if you live in the Highly-urbanized cities (the posh areas), tendency is, there'll be a lot of snobs.

Yeah, fairly urban here.

 

[MoboDroid]

in our college we familiarize with each other with charas and ganja .

 

[Sola-sama]

Some of us have been familiar long enough. Don't worry about it.

How should i know if my novel is readable ?.
because everytime i read my novel it feels ok to me ..

fr tho, feedback is the best way to know if they are ok or not. For me, my first feedback was when I already wrote around 40-ish chapter. The guy who give the feedback only read up to 13 or so. It's unfair because the early chapters were bad as I had no experience in writings, but it's understandable since you can't expect your reader to completely get used to your writing style by reading 200k words of your work

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

How should i know if my novel is readable ?.
because everytime i read my novel it feels ok to me ..

Also, what's your book about?

 

[RepresentingWrath]

I mean, give me that and I'll be too busy to familiarize.

That is the crucial difference of a man in different countries. The things that I listed would lead to the deepest bonding and the most open, spiritual talks between Russian men. Moreover, it's probably the only thing that would let them open up completely. And I'm half-joking here.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

Yeah, fairly urban here.

In low-density urban, and rural areas, you'd still find common folk sharing a good laugh, good beer and good 'pulutan' (as well as occassional fist fights) ?

 

[MoboDroid]

Anyway, sorry for hacking your thread. How about this? As an apology, I'll beta read your work?

I'll comment on the technicalities and anything else you might want to know.

dont be serious, i just joked ..

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

in our college we familiarize with each other with charas and ganja .

Wazzat? Sounds tasty. But also sounds like ninjutsu from Naruto. As you can tell from that being the first thing to come to mind, I'm American lol.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

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Lol. Nah, it ain't like that.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

In low-density urban, and rural areas, you'd still find common folk sharing a good laugh, good beer and good 'pulutan' (as well as occassional fist fights) ?

Lol! Sounds lively.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

dont be serious, i just joked ..

Oh...tis a joke? My bad.

 

[MoboDroid]

Also, what's your book about?

my story is nothing new , its a bit genric urban cultivation superpower genre, some west myths related things.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

That is the crucial difference of a man in different countries. The things that I listed would lead to the deepest bonding and the most open, spiritual talks between Russian men. Moreover, it's probably the only thing that would let them open up completely. And I'm half-joking here.

Alcohol would allow anyone to open up completely. The food is just a partner for it. Though most people would bond over it, I don't think I could unless if I already knew the person a bit before that. At the very least, of someone I know is there then it makes it easier.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

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fr tho, feedback is the best way to know if they are ok or not. For me, my first feedback was when I already wrote around 40-ish chapter. The guy who give the feedback only read up to 13 or so. It's unfair because the early chapters were bad as I had no experience in writings, but it's understandable since you can't expect your reader to completely get used to your writing style by reading 200k words of your work

It's one of the reasons I don't subject my work to 'First Chapter Feedbacks'. I mean, I get its points, but my work is more than what can be read in the first chapter. ?

 

[MoboDroid]

Wazzat? Sounds tasty. But also sounds like ninjutsu from Naruto. As you can tell from that being the first thing to come to mind, I'm American lol.

its weed ..

 

[RepresentingWrath]

my story is nothing new , its a bit genric urban cultivation superpower genre, some west myths related things.

Probably less generic than you think.

 

[Representing_Tromba]

Wazzat? Sounds tasty. But also sounds like ninjutsu from Naruto. As you can tell from that being the first thing to come to mind, I'm American lol.

Ganja is weed.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

Alcohol would allow anyone to open up completely. The food is just a partner for it. Though most people would bond over it, I don't think I could unless if I already knew the person a bit before that. At the very least, of someone I know is there then it makes it easier.

It's one of my peculiarities...I don't get drunk. Never in my life I got drunk...I don't know why.

Drank wine, whiskey, rum, beer. Nope.

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

my story is nothing new , its a bit genric urban cultivation superpower genre, some west myths related things.

Ah. Not particularly interested in that, unless leans more into novel/unique descriptions of said cultivation, has a VERY fleshed-out world, or leans into comedy heavily.

Ganja is weed.

... LMFAO! I walked into that!