Wet dream : I am the best author

[MoboDroid]

THE principal or your principal

The principal

 

[Representing_Tromba]

The principal

Of what? or is it like the principal of the matter kind of issue?

 

[MoboDroid]

Of what? or is it like the principal of the matter kind of issue?

college principal or you can say chief executive and chief academic of the college

 

[Representing_Tromba]

college principal or you can say chief executive and chief academic of the college

Headmaster gonna have to deal with you.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

is it morning there , here 5 Am , i haven't slept whole night.

Yo! I'm back!

Btw, I've read your work. And got some feedback to improve it. Where do I send it?

 

[MoboDroid]

Yo! I'm back!

Btw, I've read your work. And got some feedback to improve it. Where do I send it?

isn't there any comment section on novel.. or you give me feedback here ..
after taking screenshot your feedback i will thoroughly review my novel and try to make up for the shortcomings.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

isn't there any comment section on novel.. or you give me feedback here ..
after taking screenshot your feedback i will thoroughly review my novel and try to make up for the shortcomings.

I can also send you PM, or you really want me to comment my feedback for 'traffic'?

 

[TheMonotonePuppet]

I have been drunk a total of 3 times in my life so far and all three have been a result of drinking heavily with family. I have yet to get drunk with friends. Though it takes a lot for me to get drunk.

I am very much a lightweight. VERY lightweight.

 

[MoboDroid]

I can also send you PM, or you really want me to comment my feedback for 'traffic'?

you can say that ??

 

[Deleted member 54065]

you can say that ??

Ayt. Will do. ?

you can say that ??

Check out my feedback on your work! ^_^

I Am a protagonist ? - 6. Again Training | Scribble Hub

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[MoboDroid]

Ayt. Will do. ?

Check out my feedback on your work! ^_^

I Am a protagonist ? - 6. Again Training | Scribble Hub

www.scribblehub.com

thank you very much. those comments really show me the path and i will definitely try to improve as much i can .
before improving the basics i wont upload .??
But i won't stop writing though i must completely write what i have in my mind.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

thank you very much. those comments really show me the path and i will definitely try to improve as much i can .
before improving the basics i wont upload .??
But i won't stop writing though i must completely write what i have in my mind.

Good luck and have fun! Looking forward to your improved story!

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Go to university and take writing courses until you get an A.

 

[BlackKnightX]

Look for feedbacks: comment section or reviews. The bar on this site is quite low, though. People are more forgiving than, say, Royal Road or Amazon Kindle. The latter is understandable since your readers have to pay real money to read your work, not to mention the competition is very tough as well. But if you can pass that bar, you can at least call yourself good writer.