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  1. AnEmberOfSundown

    Burnout is funny

    Try not to judge me for quoting “Friends” but I see it like this: Dr. Franzblau: I try not to let my work affect my personal life, but it's hard, when you do... what I do [gynecologist]. It's like uh... Well, for instance, what do you do? Rachel: I'm a waitress. Dr. Franzblau: Okay, all right...
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    The Deurtagonist of my story is extremely Overpowered, but suffers from narcolepsy and lets the Protagonist almost die several times

    Long form it could get very difficult to keep that interesting unless you’ve got some interesting twists already up your sleeve. If you do, I can see how it could be interesting. Just be wary that you’re also using a real world medical condition as story fodder. Not saying don’t do it, but...
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    What are your favorite tropes? and which ones would you avoid writing?

    I avoid any trope that takes itself too seriously or is used as short hand for character backstory/trauma. But I handle them in different ways. Too self-serious: brooding grimdork anti heroes with secret royal bloodlines and cursed weapons carrying the soul of an ancient dragon etc etc etc… I...
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    The laziest thing you do as an author?

    I use random name generators. Unless there’s a specific reason for a person to have a certain name I don’t put much thought into it. Sometimes I retcon a meaning if it fits their character but mostly I just assume their parents thought “yeah that’s a nice enough name”.
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    Getting naruto shippuden-ed sucks

    My MC is an orphan and her biological parents literally never come up because they're not relevant to the story, except for one brief vision in book 4 that will explain some of her traits to the reader (in an "oh that's why she's Like That" way). Then the caster who sees it promptly wipes his...
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    What makes you love your fiction?

    Getting to realize a protagonist who's been taking shape in my mind for decades and watching her grow and overcome. Also, her supporting cast is basically my psyche shot through a prism, so getting to write their arguments and bickering is fun.
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    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    "Oh, [goats] are staples for a reason. Livelier than a pig, less unwieldy than a cow, lots of personality...isn't that right Frederick? See? Frederick agrees." "Do you know this goat?" "No. He just looks like a Frederick." "Hate to be the one to tell you this, Sundown...but that's a nanny...
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    How do you control an overpowered character so they don't break the story?

    I mean...this is it right here, really. If the story can't be about them advancing in "power" then make it about areas in which they need to grow. My MC is incredibly deadly, but the story revolves around how she keeps people from seeing her that way and how she reconciles her natural talents...
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    Deleting chapters

    I completely rewrote my introduction chapter because it was dry. Rewrites happen.? I also don't have many readers or followers though, so if you've got people invested you might want to drop a note about it once you do what you need to do to fix it.
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    How much can you bend the meaning of a tag?

    I hate to pile on to what seems to be consensus, but yeah I agree. If I went searching for "Romance" stories and came across a promising series where romance is technically a subplot but not really the plot driver? I'd be mildly annoyed at best. It would be like classifying Star Wars as High...
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    What's the most creative power or application you've written?

    It's presented as magic in a fantasy setting, but I try to keep the results grounded in reality, if that makes sense. Basically saying, if someone could instinctively control or throttle entropic decay, what real effects and limitations might that present? Even in a world with magic and healing...
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    Lost lore you just couldn't fit in.

    I feel like that would make a great anticlimax after an extended setup. Like the MC talks to their unknowing friends about their memories of this great holiday and they all visit one yer and get handed...brooms.
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    Lost lore you just couldn't fit in.

    Magic users known as Shadow Singers, or Duvcanái, are the central focus of my series. They have an intrinsic connection to primordial entropic forces and experience them as constant, low-level background “screaming”. Sensory deprivation is torture to them. Without normal sensory input, the...
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    Weird notes you have that have forgotten the context for.

    "I don't know why the ducks are being so judgy." I think it was meant to be like a snorted-awake fragment of a dream but who knows?
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    What's the most creative power or application you've written?

    My protag is able to manipulate entropy and was raised as a weapon. She's been taught to see her abilities as inherently destructive and herself as tainted for having them. As part of her healing arc, she realizes she can use that same power in a more controlled fashion to
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    What is Divinity?

    A lot of the themes in my series center around entropy and how it can serve growth when directed and controlled. Divinity, in this case, is the only force capable of reversing entropy. Wounds healed with herbal or natural magic still scar because in their cases you’re just accelerating natural...
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    Dear Fellow Authors... What is the most outrageous Nemesis you've given your protagonist in a story?

    I've got an innocent table that keeps, through no fault of its own, acting as a teleportation anchor for the MCs. Whether people are eating on it at the time or not. The tavern owner's mother is not amused by this. The wizard is about to stroke out trying to figure out why.
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