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I would put the picture at the right moment in the story. In a battle chapter, that would mean I will put a finishing move scene, a character's entrance, a "waht a tweest" moment, or such. So the picture matches the scene. Doesn't have to be in the beginning or ending, so long as it's well timed.

I hope OP is as old as me here lol. Maybe it sounds old school, but where I live, envelopes are still widely used. I don't think you need to replace the analogy. Though, I'd suggest slight editing for easier read. Added cadence and a full stop. Letting your readers pause in a long sentence...

I don't do this, but I still can't shake off the "stay with me" panicked dialogue. I use "you okay" for comedic effect most of the time. I don't avoid a specific type of other dialogues yet. Maybe when I write more I'll get to learn a few

I still use em-dashes to interrupt dialogues

Shadowmoon Raoh Gemini Saga Ivan Drago Ryubei Sonozaki / Terror Dopant Grey (the robot from Jetman) Igari Juuzo (the samurai from episode 8 of Garo Makai Senki)

Ellie's Tiger Fist. Chapter 39 of my Novel. Just a fancy alias of One Inch Punch. Able to send her foe nearly 100 meters away. But it broke her fist.

I try my best to tread on this topic carefully. For now, I haven't used slur, but might use that for fictional groups of people. Or simply tie the slurs to where a person came from (as in places) regardless of race and ethnicity.

If MC gets to befriend said antagonists after defeating them, that's the kind of my stories. But I don't think I have time to write all that. So I limit that to my current main story and another yet to be posted here spinoff. As for your questions: 1. So long as it's done well, it's cool 2...

I've changed it once at the moment. Another cover for arc 3 is on the way.

Not yet, but I will.

I hate despots with every ounce of my life, so I don't feel bad writing them as despicable villains they are.

Post the actual cover first. Please upload that to imgur and provide link.

I can't help much at the moment because I'm traveling and I don't have access to a PC. But I can help with some suggestions. First, you have too-long paragraphs. Viewed from a phone, they become ten or even twenty lines long paragraphs. You don't want that. Not in a webnovel. Because such...

Nothing too fancy. Maybe something like Kengan (fist-eye) from Kengan Ashura, some sort of kinetic eye sight. Cassa, the magic-less MC of mine has this. It allows him to perceive his foes' attack patterns in slow-motion and formulate counters. Besides that, there are also the dwarves who have...

Let's see. I do often write long descriptions, but now I'd cut most and distribute them only when the details become relevant. I'd also simplify most descriptions. If I can describe something in five words, I wouldn't do it in twenty. Maybe ten, but that's only for flavor. I'd avoid anything...

Wait, you can advertise non-RR stories on RR?

So is mine. It's common for stories with less than 50 chapters and 100k words. Give it time. Post your chapters regularly. Of course, also Improve your writing and cover when you can. You posted 15 chapters at once. That's your first problem. You should have posted them one by one, at least...

Never, or more like not yet. I simply reuse them.

In my latest published chapters, the stake is "we'll go to another war with elves if this envoy mission fails." The casts want to avoid that. Especially the second MC, whose parents came from both sides of the imminent conflict. So it could feel personal, especially when it starts in chapter 25...

Thankfully, I always keep a copy of my formatted chapters locally. SH is already rich-text compatible anyway, so what I write and format here will carry over if copy pasted to MS Word/LibreOffice Writer and vice versa. Few clicks away from "convert to pdf" and done. Unfortunately, you can't...