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  1. Bimbanana

    HI! I'm a new writer. can someone review my story and give me his opinion about it?

    1. Your synopsis contradict itself, if they are made because the city crime is too much for the existing police, why are they underfunded? 2. Cannot imagine what the city looks like, because you dont even try to describe it that much 3. Cannot imagine who is being where 4. Cannot even imagine...
  2. Bimbanana

    What is the premise of your fiction in the form of a thesis question?

    Building World Peace: How a historical evil entities a.k.a demon race can be accepted by other race as a nice guy, without losing their identity as a bad guy. Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  3. Bimbanana

    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    Sometimes jokes can come to you without you need to do anything Someone next door put this comment in one of my chapter: "why should he suffer for her death when he chooses himself above anyone I know it's selfish and heartless but look at the world his in no body gave him a choice, honestly...
  4. Bimbanana

    Which violence scene is more terrifying, subtle violence or graphic violence?

    Funny thing, i'm totally fine with fight or war violence stuffs like that. But i dont know why, im totally scared seeing medical scene. Like patients being cut open like that, ughh... Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  5. Bimbanana

    Looking for Fantasy Harem recs with actually strong female characters!

    oh! oh! Mine! Mine! My MC is the weakest demon and yet he manage to marry a Demon Queen Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  6. Bimbanana

    How do you rate your own action scenes?

    Once i tried to use one of John Wick scene for reference in my novel. Oh my god, few seconds of the movie can be a ridiculously long paragraph when i try to describe it accurately. I finally decide to limit it with six enemies and it end up with 2.000 words. Not gonna do that again anytime...
  7. Bimbanana

    Authors, please read this... *^^*

    Sometimes, i re-read all my chapters and still laughing at the jokes. Having ten of my readers in the same room and laughing together while having some beers would be a bliss. Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  8. Bimbanana

    Male protagonists or female protagonists: which one do you prefer?

    Male. Because i avoid being accused of 'mansplaining' when i dictate what my FMC going to do next. Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  9. Bimbanana

    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    "Nice gun you got there" she hides behind a wall. "Yeah," the assassin guild leader reloads his shotgun "good thing you Muricans are pretty lenient with gun controls" "We do, our amendment believe every people should born with a gun" Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  10. Bimbanana

    I'll rate your cover

    OOH! OHH! MINE! DO MINE PLEASE! Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  11. Bimbanana

    About a new story

    I know right !? It's just like me suddenly saying: "Hey! My MC is going to have his revenge with the isekai goddess!" "How? He's trapped on the demon kingdom, cursed to be level 1 forever, and have no skill but to access earth internet??" "BY TEACHING THE DEMON KINGDOM, THAT FREEDOM AND...
  12. Bimbanana

    About a new story

    1. Dude, i think you need to make another version of cover using english 2. Use " " for dialogue consistently, kinda hard to see which is narration and which is dialogue 3. Make a longer chapter and dont mass release it in one day like mentioned above 4. Good luck Building World Peace with My...
  13. Bimbanana

    Romance 18+

    I shall wait then Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  14. Bimbanana

    The laziest thing you do as an author?

    B-b-but sir, if other authors follows what you're telling them, t-t-their novel will also get mediocre views like yours :blob_blank: but jokes aside, i'm really happy that i got my first troll this soon :blob_paint: Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  15. Bimbanana

    The laziest thing you do as an author?

    Sometimes when i opened my drafts, i was surprised why it was several scenes short? Apparently i was only busy writing those particular scenes on my mind Tell me im not the only one Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  16. Bimbanana

    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    Just writing a scene where two dwarves pounding a downed enemy with their hammers. Thinking that maybe i should made them yell Hey! Ho! Hey! Ho! on every pounding :unsure: Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  17. Bimbanana

    The laziest thing you do as an author?

    Well thats not too far off Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  18. Bimbanana

    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    5 minutes ago, I promise myself not to open forum and focus on writing Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
  19. Bimbanana

    Litrpg Skill System?

    ".............." *want to jump in the threads but cannot, since his mc skill tree is basically just a google browser* Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
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