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  1. Bimbanana

    How to be funny and still be a good writer?

    You make it sound like you can't be a good writer if you do comedy. If you can deliver a comedy that many people enjoy, then you're pretty much a good storyteller. There's a reason why people in entertainment industry always say that doing comedy is harder than drama. Unless if your standards...
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    Did he use the same excuse to his earth girlfriend?

    Did he use the same excuse to his earth girlfriend?
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    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    "Our Alliance name should be Pentagram Economic Naval & Industrial Security" Monny roared, "THAT'S IT!!" "Did you even check what the acronym would be?!" Belphy roared back.
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    Thank you so much! I was busy fixing my early chapters again after reading this notes. Yes, now i try to put a bit more description to some parts, not all. Since i also need to calculate the comedic timing. On later chapters the style would slowly shift to show-not-tell thingy. I keep this...
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    D-Did my wife sent you?
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    OMG! Did god sent you? I mean, yes im using Java because why not, no one would understand anyway if im using latin. (viva google translate!) And yes, it would be very cool if i can use the OG Java. Especially since in my book 2 and 3 there would be more chanting language needed since there...
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    In my defense. Latin is overrated. GAAH! THIS CURSED BELL AGAIN!
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    A Poem for SH Forum

    ....Okay, you and english are my frenemies from now on.
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    What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

    Best: When my readers fixing my grammars for me (in RR not here) Worst: When a reader complained about a scene where a immortal husband (forever lv. 1) being beaten up by his demon queen wife (max level). Telling me if i dont like reading about a wife being beaten by her husband, i shouldnt...
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    Oh hi there mr. mood booster. Yeah, i really should. I realize the same problem when i already wrote dozens chapters. Apparently speaking fluent english when you're drunk doesnt equal good grammar skills in writing :\
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    DANKE !!! ❤️

    DANKE !!! ❤️
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    A Poem for SH Forum

    I tried to stop staring into the abyss. I succeeded for one moon. Fingers danced. Words formed. A book was born. Then I peeked again. Now it’s been two nights. No words crawl from my fingers. No books grow. Because I am once more staring into the abyss. And the bell stare me back
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    Gaah! Really?! Forgive me for being old Okay done.
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    Not as bad as I thought?

    Welcome to the age where being a writer also needs to understand digital marketing
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    I'm offering myself for the critics

    Heyya, Since im in a break between book 1 and book 2 of my work (yeay me!). And im bored with the extra free time. I'd be happy if someone want to give me some critiques about my work. Building World Peace with My Bloodthirsty Demon Army
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    1st chapter bullet points

    Just... start writing
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    Writing Does NOT Equal Endorsment!

    *sees fire in forum* *Thinking deeply what happen if i put gasoline in the fire* *Put the gasoline labeled sageGPT and quietly stepped back and disappear* 6. Why It Feels Worse Than Royal Road Royal Road: blunt algorithm-driven openly numbers-brained people say dumb shit directly Scribble...
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    Thanks dude! This boost me better than caffeine!
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Wonder if you interested to read my work below? It has readers, yes. But im just looking for some... human interaction maybe? Since surprisingly "readers" in scribble hub are very devoted to their titles. They are a very shy creatures who rarely writes in the comments, let alone review. Its...
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    Thanks! I'll wait for your blunt and biased feedback
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