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Oh that’s to let you know I’ve seen your story and I’ll do your feedback later! It’s just an acknowledgement :blob_sweat:

Hi! I just read your chapter and here are my thoughts: - The synopsis reads more like a movie trailer voiceover than a summary of the story. Instead of writing generic lines, try summarising the actual plot! The storyline is what draws readers in, not just an overview of the genre. - The...

Hi! I just read your novel and here are my thoughts: - The story is well established by its own terms and world-building. I enjoy the deities’ conversation and their distinctive personalities. The same goes for all the other characters. They all have their unique traits and charm!:blob_reach: -...

Hi! I just read your story and here are my thoughts: - Disclaimer: I know nothing about Star Wars, so the funky names kinda mess up my brain, lol. I even searched it up to find out their appearances!:blob_reach: - The synopsis is great! It took me a few tries to understand the terms, but I got...

Mate, am I tripping or like did you post this story three times on my thread :blob_shock: Not sure if you missed my feedback on your story (which I’ve read on Webnovel), so I’m just gonna post it again here: Hi! I just read your story until chapter 3 and here’s my thoughts: - it’s not bad for...

Hi! I just read chapter 1 and here are my thoughts: - The synopsis was well done! It didn’t completely reveal the plot and left room for readers to anticipate how Ethan becomes a hero. Will it be through power from another dimension or the asteroid? That curiosity definitely hooked...

Hi! Don’t worry about the questions I asked. It’s just me being curious and interested. I’m not sure if they get explained in the later chapters, but I’d feel a bit sad if they end up being neglected and the story just moves forward. Anyways, I can overlook that. I’m just a sucker for really...

Hi! I’ll just drop some feedback here: - The synopsis is okay, but I feel like it gives away the entire storyline. Maybe hold back some background information and let it unfold gradually in the chapters instead. - When I first scrolled through Chapter 1, the paragraphs felt a bit clunky...

Hi! I just read your novel up to Chapter 5, and here are my thoughts: - The book cover is exceptionally well done and very eye catching! - The synopsis does a good job of summarising the story and establishing its philosophy. - As I read Chapter 1, I noticed a similarity to how I write. Instead...

Hi! You can always train Chat GPT by sending in your text and asking it to correct your spelling without changing the originality of the text. Afterwards, read through the adjusted version and spot if there are any differences in the spelling. I used to change every word individually instead of...

Nice, I like the second video! so real, Frank Sinatra‘s music is like surviving in a world ending situation with your lover:blob_melt: But still, I‘m quite shock that half of yall don’t listen to music while writing:blob_hmm:

I thot it’s normal to listen to music while writing? I even listen to hardcore rhythm game sountracks :blob_joy: Exactly, someone gets me. It just set the mood and helps me visualise, especially when writing emotional scenes (need music to feel smth) Ohhh I‘ve never thought of that before. I...

Hi! You have found the right person to read your story! - The cover immediately caught my eyes. It reminds me of something I would see as a published cover! :blob_melt: - From the message above, I thot the mc’s name is Chorus lmao - The synopsis is a great start, although the second paragraph...

Sad to say my mum hates lao gan ma so I can’t remember how it tastes like.

Hi! Thanks for the feedback. The repeated ”story summary“ is because I copied and pasted it from the Google Doc (and also from other websites where I’ve published it). The name is 余德 (Yu De)! Yu is the surname and De is the given name, which means “surplus of dedication.” (I’m Chinese so to me...

Hi! Omg I didn’t expect such a detailed analysis of my story! You caught on to my intention, and I’m so glad the message came across.:blob_aww: This pretty much summarised my story! I know the plot sounds mature and not really suited for fast trends or clout. Ahhhh these are my favorite...

Guys, I think they might be better at giving feedback than I am. :blob_joy: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1161828/return-to-you-who-is-lost-bl/ I volunteer my work as tribute!

I always listen to specific genres to set the atmosphere and tone of my writing! Most of them are Jazz and classical, with a mix of electronic music Here are some examples: My way of life Over and over (the world we knew) As the world caves in Sway Autumn leaves Rachmaninoff piano concerto 2...

Hi! Here’s the link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1161828/return-to-you-who-is-lost-bl/ I also love your drawing, especially the colouring and poses! :blob_reach:

Hi, I did yours a while back! I also have a webnovel acc so any external links are fine with me! @RepresentingTaoism