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Thanks. That, all three of those, we're very helpful.

I typically avoid time travel stuff but I do have a character suggestion. A sentient DeLorean that is confused as to why it is sentient and why it can time travel. It also has a very nice cup holder. Follow up question: why robo Hitler and not cyborg?

There is nothing here that I need to say because someone already said it.

You are not overly sensitive. What happened isn't right and never will be. You just recognized that.

There is nothing more precious than the word of God, cherish it and follow it and believe in it. For if you do, and obey the lord, good days and better shall await you ahead.

I'm a Christian, OK? Now before you automatically disagree with what I'm about to say, the Bible actually does touch on this topic. Not exactly directly, but it does. You're still here? Good. I'm sure you know about Satan, the enemy, the devil. Well Satan is a spirit, just like the holy...

Thank the one who sent me! And if you need anymore advice feel free to ask.

One of the things you could do to diversify them is to give them their own personal voice. Character one is green, okay. Character two is blue. When writing for character two you could have him be more snappy, both when he speaks and when writing for his thoughts and what he's doing. While...

I'm not too sure about that.

It would seem that you did. My mistake sir.

Are you saying that the drink has to have caffeine?

May... May I see your evidence please? What if I don't like coffee?

The one who loves me( I presume you know who I'm talking about) loves people, and therefore so do I. As such I wish to help you in the ways that I can (through my God given ability to do so.) so feel free to ask for any writing advice. The short version: writing tips for the price of not using...

I'm probably not qualified to be in this conversation, buts it's charizard. He's a dragon and he has a constantly burning tail.

Are testimonies okay?

Proverbs: 18:12 Death and life are in the power of the tongue: and they that love it shall eat the fruit thereof. James: 3:5 Even so the tongue is a little member, and boasteth great things. Behold, how great a matter a little fire kindleth!

I think we all know what plagiarism is. At face value, what your describing sounds a lot like plagiarism. But so does most of fiction. What matters is if you are writing Your own story. If there is enough of you in your story that when I read yours side by side with the original and can't...

I'm sorry that any of that happened to you and the people close to you.

I know right! I was honestly expecting to get banned at this point. I'm going to vaguely reply to your post. (It's kinda big and I'm not going to comprehensively respond to all of it.) But, yeah, Christians aren't supposed to go around condemning people. Jesus didn't come to condemn the world...

A good way to prevent yourself from feeling bad about what other people say is to evaluate what they mean to you. Then evaluate their actual experience and knowledge on the subject.