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I know this is totally unrelated, but I want to hear your thoughts on this draft. Is this how you write in the past tense?

Where is your PC anyway? @BouncyCactus

Sure. I don't mind.

Nice. Is there someone that I can roleplay with?

Well, I guess I need a writing partner then. Do I have to write a novel first before roleplaying?

Are there NPCs that I can interact with?

I'm curious to ask, but where do I write at?

Name: Maximilian Spellmeyer Gender: Male Race: Human Age: 23 Appearance: Standing average and lightly built, Maximilian is a young man with fair skin, blue eyes, and black hair. He wears a brightly-colored Prussian military uniform, including an iconic spiked leather helmet, the Pickelhaube or...

Nice. I'm joining because I have been struggling with using tenses, which are the past tense and the present tense. But otherwise, I haven't decided to join yet, so it's still under consideration.

I know this is a silly question, but can we play as a rebel?

So I read a little bit of this, and I'm not sure if it's written in the past tense or the present tense. Just a fair warning, some light novels on this website are poorly written English translations of Japanese, Korean, and Chinese ones...

I think I'll go with using the past tense. If you want, you can tell me what to change, and I'll edit it from there. Are you okay with that?

Do you want me to edit them?

Cool. I might give ProWritingAid a chance. Did you notice any issues in the prologue of my story regarding tenses?

That's not what I meant. I meant as in English grammar. I appreciate your advice, though. lol Nice. I like your advice very much. I do use Grammarly. I used ProWritingAid before, but it wasn't my cup of tea. Will do. I don't want to read too many books, though.

In need of advice, would you tell me more about tenses in general and how I can make my writing clearer? I watched some videos about it, but I could hardly understand it. Any help would be appreciated. @Snusmumriken @KoyukiMegumi

That's good to hear. I'm trying not to give up on writing again, so I'm trying my best.

Wow, I strongly agree with your point. I do want to write a serious piece, but it seems to be anything but that. As I said, it's not meant to be read like a documentary; it's meant to be read like fiction, and anything that has to do with fiction means fantasy, worldbuilding, and the like...

I agree with your remark. I'm not the best at telling the difference between past tense and present tense. It's a common habit and mistake I make all the time while at the same time thinking it's a natural way to write. I'm autistic, so that's another reason. It does make the writing confusing...

Awesome. If you want, you can check out my story down below. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/311191/the-great-siege/