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Aww, the Prince of Darkness rest in peace ?

I've only had my story up for little over month. I don't get much engagement on here, got like 23 readers here, but not really any comments aside from one person who was helping me with feedback. There's one person who seems to favorite all of my chapters which I appreciate. Have only one rating...

Just make your character and pray your fans think they're iconic, I guess? :sweat_smile: I don't think there is a lot you can do other than writing your characters as unique and likeable. You can't really control who is iconic. That's too hard to predict.

No, still read them. Each one just has a certain feeling or vibe to them that I like. I can't put it into other words. :blob_uwu: Other stories while I guess similar to them, just feel different.

That makes me curious now. I've got only one rating on here, and it's a five star. I'm not sure who left it. But I do appreciate it. Though I wonder, if it happens for every story, I wonder if it's a bot or something. Or maybe someone's really bored or nice and trying to put in some charity. lol

I see... I'm not sure exactly what I'd like to see, but I guess since he's working towards becoming sentient make him smart and also driven by revenge towards the system that made him and everyone else npcs. Maybe since he was originally an NPC, he hides the fact that he became sentient again...

So, like is it his system that causes him to become sentient, again? And I'm not quite sure what feedback you might be looking for. I've read lots of LitRPGs and am currently writing one, too, but it's my first time writing one as well. ? So I guess I'm asking for clearer instructions on what...

Oh yeah, had that happen to me at least 3 times over on Wattpad. The first 2 I thought they were legit and actually liked my story, but then they kept trying to sell me their skills as artists. A third person tried to do the same thing and commented on my story about how great it was, then I...

I lowkey really wish there wasn't a feature that let's us see that someone dropped your story. It's pretty demoralizing.

I said it in RR. But basically overall theme is resilience through hardship and isolation. That's the shortened version. Plus several sub themes, like escaping or being stuck in toxic family relationships and structures, individuals stuck in a crappy system through no fault of their own but...

Idk if I've ever shelved an idea forever. Maybe I might put a story on the back burner, but my brain still wants to do eventually.

I mean I don't think it's too dialogue heavy, personally. Of course I'm someone who's okay with dialogue as long as there a slight breaks in-between and it's not being used as a tool to info dump.

Username is because I like whales especially beluga whales and sprite like fairy is just referring to my favorite genre for reading which is fantasy. My avatar is a picture I drew of that one puppet monkey meme, because I like drawing, and I like memes. :blob_teehee: that's it.

You're welcome! Good luck.

I'm not sure if I'm right. I think the warning is good for the prologue. But your story at least to me seems pretty good so far. I like the premise of the prologue talking about how a mage doesn't feel the weight of the lives he takes as deeply as other kinds of people would. But the two...

Okay... Read your first chapter so far. I think the concept is interesting, but you do have some issues with spelling in some places. Like "Feinted" should be "fainted." Or "from" should be "form". Also you do use some repetitive words. Especially "shadow". If you can come up with a different...

Depends what you wanna do. First person is going to be just from that characters perspective. It'll include their bias and see things from their own view. I think it's a great tool if you wanna make a story from someone's distorted point of view (I think the unreliable narrator trope is fun)...

Oh are you still doing these? I'd love to get some constructive criticism if you still are. My story is here Just so we're aware. I'm already aware I do use certain phrases for certain body language a lot.... I just bought a book that I hope can help me get better with variety in that aspect ?

Thank you! I'm sorry to hear you haven't been well. But glad you've been a little better recently. It's definitely great when your health is improving!