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  1. LoneQuack

    Short or Long Titles?

    Brother, you forgot the prologue with that second title. If I don't know the name of the mc, the name of the setting, the name of the genre, and a general idea of the entire novel its a big no no. Back to the drawing board and next time make sure to put the entire story as the tittle don't...
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    One Weird Power Fantasy Trope

    I wouldn't call it much of a trope. More like bad writing. My mc is incredibly op and I make it very clear to the reader. The only thing is he himself doesn't realize it and his most broken powers are very limited. To point out the two main he will have in his arsenal, one is future sight...
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    Pls give me constructive feedbacks, I am trying to improve my writing style.

    I would recommend to first be done with the chapter, write it the way you want it to the best of your ability without any potential changes, and then posting it. There really isn't any reason to ask for feedback if you already know what you are lacking, and you might seem like a spam in which...
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    Webnovel, the site

    Also I'd like to add that Tapas is mostly for Manhwas. Idk the specific but I wouldn't be surprised if the ratio between manhua vs novel reader is like 1/10 and I still find that a highball.
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    Webnovel, the site

    I'm also curious about WB but the contracts specifically. I have a good idea about how predatory they are (had read the one for newbies about the forth months a few months ago) but I am still interested. I would like to make some money though my work and as I see it right now, WB is the best...
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    Is it just me or does this really happen?

    I'm guessing you just started writing. I got that all the time, and pretty much every new writer gets it to some degree. Then will come the phase where you hate yourself for everything you write. Either you'll stop there or continue writing, and after that, at some point you will grow confident...
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    How can I learn to recognize why my writing is boring or bad?

    As a multi-millionaire entrepreneur once said: I'm so straight, I could such a dick and it wouldn't be gay... you take your garbage out, does that make you a garbageman?
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    What are peoples thoughts on authors allowing their readers to finish a story for them?

    Even if I never finish my story (something I will never consider doing in the first place) my answer would still be a big no no. There is only one retard that can write this shit and it ain't anybody other than me.
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    I hate that elves live for a 1000 years. I don’t care if it’s the staple. It’s jarring.

    There are way worse things than lazy lifespan, but I get what you're saying. As its already stated, cause they saw Tolkien and copied without understanding much after that. Now, if it makes you feel any better, in my story Elves have pretty much the same lifespan with humans( a bit better than...
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    Gone

    Okay, here's an important question: Is there a White Lullaby City?:blob_hmm:
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    Help me choose my writting style!

    Hope this clears out the confusion
  12. LoneQuack

    Draft Feedback: Short Prologue

    B-b-but h-he is my friend. He... he wouldn't lie to me, He wouldn't lie to me!
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    Draft Feedback: Short Prologue

    Yey! I have a friend! Never had one of those. That's like having a fruit right?
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    Draft Feedback: Short Prologue

    And now for the little devil in your hears -ahem- don't listen to SailusGebel he is clearly gaslighting you, and he isn't even trying to hide it well. I mean, admitting you've being wrong? Like, come on, at least try something more believable next time. For @Arch9CivilReactor (if @Tempokai is...
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    Draft Feedback: Short Prologue

    you are having a blast aren't you :ROFLMAO: :ROFLMAO::blob_sir::blob_sir:
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    Of course, no problem. It helped me as well so it was a win-win. Gl with the rest of your work!

    Of course, no problem. It helped me as well so it was a win-win. Gl with the rest of your work!
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    Draft Feedback: Short Prologue

    I'd say its disorientating. You open up with a tone of regret and half way through you throw us in the middle/ending of a fight with their only correlation being "he killed my friend." There are a lot of questions that need to be answered if you want me (or anyone for that matter) interested...
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    a cool line, or a favourite quote

    A very fun one from Shadow Slave: "I am Lost from Light, who was born from the shadows. I am the rightful heir of death and the bastard son of fate. Wherever I go, ruin follows. If you had any sense, you would have run away as soon as you saw me."
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    Looking for feedback on contemporary queer comedy/romance in progress (even if you're cis het!)

    I can make around a hundred or so black jokes that many black people would enjoy, yet I’m confident that you wouldn’t be laughing. I hope this subtle comment helps you understand why you aren’t attracting your intended audience.
  20. LoneQuack

    My Journey writing to a niche: Encouragement

    Not to be that guy (while proceeding that guy), if you need outside motivation to start your writing journey, you are cooked before you even enter the kitchen. Like Mr. Comatoast has said, you need passion to do it, and I'd like to add, having fun while doing so. I still remember the first few...
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