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If that's the way you want to present it, that's completely your decision. If the MC and narrative are one in the same, it could be I'm just used to seeing it written in first person. If you like it keep it :) I honestly don't know what others here like, or if 3rd person close is popular. A...

I neve no stake in this at all really being that I only follow the chicks and listen to their feedback. However, I see your response and have a concern or two. I also stopped after chapter 1. There was enough confusion between the narrator and main character... Which aren't delineated enough...

Spot on review. Thank the chicks for such dedication :)

I looked at the synopsis. It's like a play on Tron? If you've not read the basics on that movie, you should. It's really cool.

The Chicks are seldom super harsh. Good luck though :)

Another fine review. I thoroughly enjoy seeing your feedback. It also looks like your popularity is growing! Keep up the good work!

Spot on review. Please keep up the the fine feedback you provide.

Not really. For me it is about the same as watching a movie or watching TV. I get emotional in the moment, as you are really meant to with that genre. I suppose the way I can describe it in my head is like this: It is only a story. It is a tale that the writer(s) have designed to pull at a...

I personally wouldn't take the risk. 18/19 is still teenage and its above the age of consent for most. I think you can get your tragedy within the scope of being an adult and a teen. It's just better to be safe than sorry. You wouldn't want to be 50k words into the work and suddenly get banned...

Depends on the fantasy for me. The way gunpowder changed everything here in real life can happen again with fantasy. If you are wanting more traditional Dungeons and Dragons fantasy, then having no guns works. If you want it to be similar to World of Warcraft, where it's fairly low tech that...

Envy all the way @RepresentingEnvy You are such a good person, so yes, you deserve to be the best idol!

I am going with my fellow vampire lover. I have this thing for cute vampire ladies all over each other. Plus, Enora and Melle are adorable and dorky. :love::s_wink::blob_happy: