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  1. SurfAngel_1031

    Thank you so much for following me. Feel free to reach out if you wanna chat!

    Thank you so much for following me. Feel free to reach out if you wanna chat!
  2. SurfAngel_1031

    Any time. You seem to have a fairly level head and I enjoy seeing your responses.

    Any time. You seem to have a fairly level head and I enjoy seeing your responses.
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    Novel end up with suicide. To post or not to post.

    That's in reference to video and images. Look at the surrounding things also prohibited. Since you are writing, it's the prohibited content section that's going to apply. I don't see anything about suicide. Having said that; if it were me, I'd take my time and address why I wanted to make...
  4. SurfAngel_1031

    Thank you so much for following!

    Thank you so much for following!
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    My bday passed.

    A very cute box at that. Can I jump in there with you? We can play hide and seek.
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    Ask Stone or Ink for Feedback. (Closeddd)

    I read that way differently. Things change when 'stone' becomes 'stoned.'
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    Ask Stone or Ink for Feedback. (Closeddd)

    Stone send to be pretty level headed in the responses I've seen across the forums, so this should prove to be fun to read.
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    Average litrpg readers age?

    I loved those "Choose your own Adventure" books! They've been out forever, and most of them are great. I know that wasn't your point. Lol. Yeah, I've noticed that the writing for it is rather hit or miss. Either way, I'll take a look at yours. Might give me a different perspective. Thanks!
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    ?️ The Storm That Claimed Me - Feedback Request

    You make a very good argument for your assessment about it being the exact same. The way the request for feedback is, wow. I felt like I saw a clone.
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    Average litrpg readers age?

    The few I've seen have all been first person with the character narrating the whole thing. Especially the "system". I thought that's what I the norm was. If you can suggest a good book I'll take a look.
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    Ask Stone or Ink for Feedback. (Closeddd)

    I tend to think one can be honest and still be nice. It could be I'm just strange.
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    Ask Stone or Ink for Feedback. (Closeddd)

    You are a brave soul. I used to help out with reviews on another thread and man. Some were fantastic and others were... "Omg my eyes are bleeding." I guess my only question would be - why be brutal or harsh, can't the same be accomplished by being... Well nice? Or just not brutal?
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    Average litrpg readers age?

    You asked a great question. I wish I knew myself. I've toyed with the idea of LitRPG, but I'm not used to writing in first person, so all my ideas are in outline just waiting for me to stop being scared. Along those lines I found that the research by reading method was unsatisfying. I found a...
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    Critical review of my novel series , Bride Of The Blade.

    That I found profoundly annoying. And the 30% AI generation I got for every chapter makes me suspicious. I wanted to give feedback but I think I'll keep it to myself and move along.
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    Looking for someone to review my work and I'm willing to do review swaps.

    When I get time I'll happily take a read. I'm starting chapter 6 of Amber and Vasia so it might be a little bit. I've already added it to my reading list, so I can find it easy. I mean vampires are my bag.
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    Apparently coming up with your own pantheon is hard… who knew?

    What are you having issues with? I mean a pantheon is nothing but a collection of gods / goddesses and what they favor. Most of that work has been done over the thousands of human lives. Just mirror what you need for basic things like war and love, but if you have something unique like the...
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    Will the views be affected if I first posted a rough draft then refine it later???

    Why would you post a rough draft? There's no time requirements. Post a complete and edited chapter. If it doesn't make sense then no one will get past the opening. If the grammar isn't too awful but the concept is fun, they will stick around a bit. But wow, yeah posting a rough draft...
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    How should I keep my audience hooked??

    I'm not sure how you work your chapters, but for me it works out that I write an entire chapter - not just upload from the editor. I use word and Google docs to get my entire goal for that chapter out, to include my outline. Then I write. That's usually between 7-10k words now. That's easily...
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    Why use AI to write your "book"?

    Still the worst ink ever was from a pen in the 80s that was new then called an eraser mate. Right handed people loved the darn thing. Me? It was a cylindrical torture device. More smear than ink and my wrist was even black.
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    Why use AI to write your "book"?

    There are still typewriters. ? I feel your pain on being a lefty though. I curl my hand and everything. Used the left handed notebooks, the whole messy business. No matter what, there's smears and ink all over your hand.
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