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I can’t believe I came back from the holidays to find 18 stories waiting for feedbacks ? Looks like I can’t quit anytime soon huh

Hi, I just read your novel and here are my thoughts: - The premise of the story is very interesting! Gambling, but with your own take on it. - I don’t understand the rules written in the preface, but I think having a story scenario would better illustrate how it should be played. - I can see...

Hi! I just read your story and here are my thoughts: - The cover art is amazing! I can tell it wasn’t AI-generated, and it really helped me visualise the MC. It also captures the mood of the story well.:blob_aww: - The prologue was intriguing and gave me a good idea of what to expect, though I...

yo, im finally back from the holidays! Back to work now so I’ll review yall work slowly but just know im still here. Give me some time:blob_cookie:

Gotta say, this is the funniest shit I ever read. Alright you caught me. I wrote it without a storyboard and purely out of impulse (I just wanted to write smut) But I understand your frustration, heck, I even lost interest in my own story for one whole year? Even my beta reader said chapter 1...

Hi, I just read your story up to chapter 3, and here are my thoughts: - The cover and synopsis are well done. You didn’t expose the entire storyline and kept it generalised while also foreshadowing the true nature of the system! - I really enjoyed the mother-son interactions. I could tell both...

Ugh the weather is so hot, it’s killing me. My back is like so sweaty and I have been rotting in bed for days, reading and writing. Save me from this heat pls

Hi! I just read your story up to chapter 3, and here are my thoughts: - I love the cover illustration! It really feels like it captures the atmosphere of the whole story and sets the genre well (Wuxia).:blob_aww: - The synopsis is quite unique, it starts off with a teacher’s letter rather than...

Hi! I just read your chapter 2 and here are my thoughts: - I kinda preferred the paragraphing style in Chapter 1, the stanza format with spacing between paragraphs. You can consider making it into a standardised format. - There are some repeated phrases, like: [White levitated in the air in...

Hi! I just read your story, and here are my thoughts: - The world building is insane. You’ve considered every aspect down to the tiniest details, and the glossary reads almost like a research paper, seriously impressive! I really admire your dedication in using your own terms and making the...

Hi! I just read your story, and here are my thoughts: - I love the attention to detail, especially the way the MC retains her original personality instead of instantly merging with Amy. (There’s also a great portrayal of the mental confusion between the two souls!):blob_happy: - Her reactions...

Idk, even the author is unclear about this (it will come naturally haha) The Saga of Tanya the Evil is peak entertainment. I might introduce guns just to feel cool:blobrofl: Isn’t that Death Note but multilingual

Only works if he changes an event three months before it starts. It doesn’t affect events that already happened or haven’t happened but is too far in the future. It has to be three months in advance. If the event is already in motion, he can’t change the course of it. In the first timeline...

I just want to know how you guys usually plan superpowers or abilities. Do you usually match the ability to the character’s personality, or treat it as a plot device? If so, do you ever try to create an original superpower just for fun? Also, do you think there’s a need for restrictions? Here’s...

3k words per chapter. But I cut it into 3 parts, one part is 1k words. So it’s easier for have frequent updates than dumping it all at once.

Lowkey, I write for personal enjoyment. Even though I sometimes lose interest in a story arc, I don’t force myself to write chapters. I just do it whenever I feel like it. I actually took a year-long hiatus because I lost interest in my work, lol. But I’m finally out of that phase and back to...

Hi, I read your first chapter and here are my thoughts: - VERY interesting formatting! It’s similar to poetry, with one line per paragraph. While it’s easy to read, it does feel a bit fragmented. - That said, I really enjoyed it! It reminded me of a physical novel I once read that also used a...

Hi, I just read your story up to Chapter 3 and here are my thoughts: - Thanks for the heads up on your synopsis. The title is relevant to the story, and the empty cover doesn’t matter. However, I feel like the synopsis was a bit misleading. - For your synopsis, you could write something simple...

Hi! I just read your story up to Chapter 3 and here are my thoughts: - I like how you actually wrote the title in your story in Chapter 2! It supports the concept of character building as he navigates through pain and suffering to find his personal direction.:blob_aww: - The world building is...

Dialogues in English go like this: “Blah blah blah,” he said/replied/exclaimed. That’s the standardised writing format. If you write like this [Ayëron: blah blah] it feels more like a script. So yeah, just replace the dashes with inverted commas at both ends of the sentence and add the pronouns...