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  1. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi, I just woke up and started reading your work. Here’s my thoughts: - ITS SO SILLY AHAHAH like the words wdym “yeet” “goddamn” “NTR” in the middle of serious formed sentences?? It really disrupts the flow of the setting with these modern words but if you’re heading for a comical type story...
  2. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Or maybe because I was reading fast :sweat_smile:
  3. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi! I have read all your chapters and here’s my thoughts: - Very interesting concept! I was hooked by the synopsis, it was short, simple and straightforward. - Your illustrations really help me to visualise how your character looks like. (Ngl the unravel song keep playing in my head when I was...
  4. Yuin

    Hi, pls roast a novel that I wrote a year ago

    Thanks buddy for reading this novel that I forgot it existed! I haven’t proofread my novel so I’m not surprised by the mistakes and inconsistencies here and there. But if you think the prologue was good, then it gives me the motivation to rewrite chapter 1 onwards lol (yea I just rewrote...
  5. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Idk what kind of sects you mean but my half tired brain just make me read the informations faster yuh Hi! I have read your story until chapter 5 and here’s my thoughts: - I was a bit confused about the setting of the story (thot it was taking place during modern times) until I read about the...
  6. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi! I have read all your prologues and here’s my thoughts! - GREAT USE OF DIALOGUES (lowkey I’m jealous because my dialogues are always so npc) - this type of writing style helps to make the story more emotional and create a bond between the reader and the characters like what a cute family! -...
  7. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Hi! I read your novel until chapter 5 and here’s my initial thoughts: - the writing is easy to understand, I was able to skim through without losing track of the storyline (lowkey not my cup of tea and it’s already midnight for me so I’m abit tired) - there’s a distinct writing style...
  8. Yuin

    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Dump your links here and I’ll give you a wonderful bs review! (With sincerity! Straight from the heart!:blob_cookie:) (I’m an inexperienced, unprofessional author/reader so take my words lightly. I’m doing this for fun because I’m bored. Feel free to disagree with my opinions, I just want to...
  9. Yuin

    Hi, pls roast a novel that I wrote a year ago

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1161828/return-to-you-who-is-lost-bl/ btw, the BL element isn’t strong because I know many of the readers are not comfortable with that (I revised my prologue and remove the smut scene :blobthumbsup:) warning: I don’t have a storyboard when writing this. I...
  10. Yuin

    Ask Stone or Ink for Feedback. (Closeddd)

    Hii can I please get STONE for my story?
  11. Yuin

    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Please roast mine :blob_evil: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1161828/return-to-you-who-is-lost-bl/
  12. Yuin

    Thank you :blob_cookie:

    Thank you :blob_cookie:
  13. Yuin

    I feel that, other than grammar, my use of words and sentence structure is a bit strange. It’s...

    I feel that, other than grammar, my use of words and sentence structure is a bit strange. It’s not like I don’t understand the vocab’s meanings, it’s more like the way I write is very abstract (basically no one uses it like that) but I guess the message still comes across :sweat_smile: I don’t...
  14. Yuin

    Hello! This is my first time using Scribble Hub to post my story. I feel kinda… not confident...

    Hello! This is my first time using Scribble Hub to post my story. I feel kinda… not confident about my story because I don’t have anyone to proofread it and I wrote a genre that I know not many people may like it (it’s BL). So if you’re free and interested, please check it out. It may not be...
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