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Hi guys, Just wanted to let y’all know that I’m free and bored. The reason I give feedback so quickly is because I don’t format my responses like essays, nor do I dive into deep critique. I just share my first thoughts, and that’s it! And no, I’m not unemployed. I just have insanely long breaks.

I think you can focus on what happened to the siblings and describe their grim situation and maybe the mc arguing with the parents at first about their decision to move house. I think that will be more realistic. Mentioning outfits is fine but repeating it back to back is like a bit silly. You...

Hi! I read the whole thing, and here are my thoughts! - It’s very refreshing to read. I know it sounds weird to say that since it’s supposedly “horror” (I’m unfazed though). I feel like the writing style makes it so easy for me to read unlike my own convoluted writing. I can totally see the...

Okay, give me some time. I’m still waiting for my work to be stone, or ink by you (pls say smth negative)

Yea, other than that, I don’t do story planning. I just write and write so lowkey I’ve lost track of my story’s direction. That’s also why I stopped writing for a whole year. So, to any new authors here, don’t be like me: impulsive and irresponsible. Treat your story well and it will...

Hi! I’m just gonna drop some feedbacks here: - I think there’s a grammar mistake in the first sentence. “The clatter of busy keyboards and hushed conversations were the only sounds that pierced the dull silence of the office.” change the “were the only sounds” to “was the only sound” because...

Hi! I briefly read your story up to Chapter 3, and here are my thoughts: - Generally, the grammar isn’t bad. However, I feel that Chapter 1 starts off a bit roughly, which was also pointed out in a comment below. I’m not sure why, but it feels kind of jagged, and there’s not much happening. I’m...

I’m still waiting for someone to roast my work properly… UGH it’s so hard to edit Yep… I just edited my chapter 1 and omg, the overwhelming cringe!! It’s so embarrassing that people have to read what I wrote a year ago without checking the consistencies and whether it makes sense. But I got...

Hi! I just read your story until chapter 4 and here’s my thoughts: - The synopsis was good enough to get me interested. However, chapter 1 wasn’t the best hook. The first three chapters were just telling me the situation the MC is facing without expanding on his mental state. It just briefly...

I think I accumulated too many words to even be bothered finding out the mistakes like 40k words to correct ahhh it’s gonna be the end of me.

I know this is a major red flag, but once I write a chapter, I don’t look back at it anymore. Until now, I’ve never read my story as a whole, and I’ve ignored all the mistakes because reading my own work is the least enjoyable part for me. My story has some potential, and I am passionate about...

Awww thank you for the advice. Sometimes, I feel weird correcting people’s grammar when my English isn’t that good lol.

Hi! Thanks for reading my story! I didn’t realise this feedback was about my story until I read the Nathan part because I just woke up :sweat_smile: I haven’t edited chapter 1, just the prologue only so the whole story is still a mess:sweating_profusely: About the BL element, I completely...

Ohhh, for my case, I have a steady view count from last year until the recent chapters I uploaded yesterday eh. It’s hard to gauge whether the readers like my work because no one likes or comments on it:blob_cringe:. I did post it on other websites and mostly I get was “unique writing with...

Hi, I just read your story until chapter 2 (bcs I have to sleep) so let me type this real quick: - I know your story thru the other threads and I feel that their feedbacks are much better than mine but here’s my thoughts. The story idea is great with solid world building, especially the...

Hi! I just read your novel until chapter 5 and here’s my thoughts: - Prologue was good. The description of action caught my attention and the ending paragraphs got my heart racing for her! It’s not completely perfect, but it’s clear cut. - Chapter 1 was okay although the dialogues take up 60%...

Hi! I just read your novel until chapter 5 and to answer your question….. not really. Here’s why: The grammar is disrupting the flow of the story and it’s making the scenarios less enjoyable. I’m not a grammar expert but the sentence structures sometimes got me questioning if my English is okay...

Hi! I just read your story and here’s my thoughts: - VERY chunky ah paragraphs. Pls pls break them into 2-3 lines per paragraphs, it makes it easier for fast reader like me to get hook up instead of like losing interest due to the walls of text in every interval. - Idk but there’s so many time...