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Could you please send me links or specific chapter references from your novel regarding this? Please go directly to the specific chapters so I can read them directly. I'd like to assess it objectively before commenting further.

If you want to provide an introduction as background or worldbuilding, you can include it in the prequel. You can include an author's note in the prologue so that new readers who are already interested in your novel can delve deeper through your prequel without disrupting the rhythm and pacing...

I think most of the antagonists in the Naruto series are iconic and have depth, not just strong characters. I like Pain not because he's the strongest or the greatest, but because of the ideas he brings to bear on the failure of the Shinobi world and offers a path of suffering as a solution to...

The boundaries of power levels in the Boruto series are also increasingly blurred. Many antagonists without backgrounds emerge as big bosses and easily overthrow old powers. It's as if all the antagonists in the Naruto series are 'trash' before antagonists of the Boruto series. Yet many Naruto...

This reminds me of the Naruto series, which was followed by Boruto. Although this work continues the story, the contrast between Boruto and Naruto is clear. Baruto, written by another author with the permission of the Naruto author, seems to have lost the spirit and artistic flair of the story...

This isn't a miniseries, but a surrender series! He himself said: "Today, I think I won't continue this story. Not because I no longer believe in it, but because I feel I've strayed from the essence I wanted to give it. I made mistakes: in the structure, in the pacing, in the way I constructed...

You've given up on continuing the story. Why comment on a story that's already been discontinued? Even if there's feedback, your story is already dead. It's better to first organize your own writing intentions, rather than seeking attention from other authors.

Then you should read this (not a promotion but an affirmation): https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1662165/the-blood-rose-princess-just-wants-to-live-in-peace-with-her-little-daughter/

The title is unreadable because it is obscured by the image background color. Solution: color the title with a color that contrasts with the background color (for example, the contrast of red is green).

Who are the Real Saviours of the World? I read a lot of fiction about brave heroes who fought tooth and nail in wars to save human civilization. But I doubt that such heroes exist in the real world, considering that heroes themselves are often the subject of propaganda that plays a role in...

From your synopsis, your story appears to fall into the dark fantasy genre with elements of tragic romance. How about swaping reviews with me? My novel is also a dark fantasy with elements of motherhood. If you agree, we can review the prologue and one chapter to assess the novel's strengths and...

Based on Narrative Structure, Which Category do Your Novels Fall Into? Every fictional story is basically composed based on a narrative structure that forms the story structure. Based on the narrative structure, fictional stories can be grouped into 3 categories, including: (1) stories based on...

Please condense your story idea into a single, concise premise that encapsulates the entire narrative. Write a synopsis so even the casual reader knows where your story is going. Honestly, if you describe the story that long, I'm not interested in reading it. Regards

I can't offer any real advice because I'm still learning as a new writer for 1.5 months. My Royal Road novel doesn't even have any ratings or reviews yet. So all I can say is: we're both still learning.

The narrative function of maps is to explain the specific locations where the characters are and show the possibility of world exploration in future arcs while mapping out potential geopolitical conflicts in the future. I agree with @Paul__Michaels : "Are these different sections of the world...

Isn't this the etiquette of asking for a review? Too detailed... It's suitable as a guideline. Thanks.

Are you still using the 3-act structure in composing a chapter?

I appreciate reader feedback in any form, whether it's favorites, ratings, or comments, whether they're criticisms or suggestions. By providing feedback, readers are contributing to the development of the novel. We should respect and value each other. It doesn't always have to be responded to...

I don't know your writing goals. If you want to achieve engagement with hundreds of thousands of views, thousands of favorites, and thousands of readers, then researching the market and adapting the genres to the narrative might be a strategic move. But if you're pursuing other goals, such as...

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