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    What is the Lore System in Isekai Power Fantasy Novels?

    What is the Lore System in Isekai Power Fantasy Novels? I've read hundreds of novels/manga/manhwa/manhua about isekai power fantasy with systems, but very few provide a valid, solid, and coherent explanation of the lore system. There are two examples of popular novels that can be used as...
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    Too spicy for RR?

    If that were possible, the world of film and anime would be more diverse and less likely to become stale (because many anime are clichéd). Unfortunately, most films and anime are adapted from already popular works. Unsung original works have little place.
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    The dilemma of the first chapter (Children of Laice)

    You can't force people to do what you want. Everyone is busy. You have to respect other people's privacy. I've been polite enough to you. There were no profanities, sarcasm, or arrogance because I respect the person I'm talking to. But you're being sarcastic towards me. If you don't want my...
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    The dilemma of the first chapter (Children of Laice)

    Alright, my friend. The first two versions of the chapter total at least 5,000 words. I'll need some time to evaluate them. And don't expect much, I'm just an amateur writer and novel reader as a hobby.
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    The dilemma of the first chapter (Children of Laice)

    It's a good thing it wasn't a prologue, because I've encountered many web novels with 4,000-word prologues. While the content was good, the misplacement of the prologue resulted in a lack of readers.
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    The dilemma of the first chapter (Children of Laice)

    Is the first chapter a prologue? If so, I think it would be great if readers could follow this through to the end. Both versions have over 3,000 words. New readers will skip it immediately. This is not a paperback novel but a web novel that demands fast consumption and attention. Prologues are...
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    Uh, do I use an exposition or keep the readers absolutely baffled with my concept?

    It depends on where your narrative begins, OP protagonists and growing protagonists have different starting points in the narrative. It all starts from the starting point of how you narrate your prologue to hook the readers.
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    Looking for satisfying death.

    You want a satisfying death? How about this hero?! It's brutal, tragic, and shocking. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1689217-blood-rose-her-last-mercy-was-death/chapter/1689256/
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    Looking for satisfying death.

    The death of a good man (a side character), not brutal but full of layers of emotion and meaning of life. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1662165-blood-rose-princess-just-wants-to-live-in-peace-with-her-little-daughter/chapter/1755535/
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    Uh, do I use an exposition or keep the readers absolutely baffled with my concept?

    Yes, lore should serve as a backdrop to the story, providing a philosophical explanation of how the conflict in the main story works, unfolding step by step as the story unfolds as a world mystery. Don't reveal everything at once, especially not in the prologue. Don't treat readers like fools...
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    How do you develop manuscript skills as an author?

    Are you actually writing directly into English? That would be both amazing and incredibly difficult. You have to abstract the plot and translate it simultaneously. If you can reach this level, you've developed parallel thinking skill. It's difficult; I can't achieve it. I live in a country...
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    When people prefer to confide in AI, is this a sign of a social empathy crisis?

    Then why do they become therapists if they don't care about their patients? Don't tell me it's because of global capitalism. lol
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    When people prefer to confide in AI, is this a sign of a social empathy crisis?

    Isn't it a paradox that a therapist who should understand humans best actually treats patients as if they were not human?:oops:
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    When people prefer to confide in AI, is this a sign of a social empathy crisis?

    I don't understand how trauma can be prescribed with ice. I'm just a layman :s_eek:
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    What Type of Heroine do You Prefer: Moral Heroines or Love Interest Heroines?

    Yes, Violet finds for the meaning of love. This makes her a moral heroine, seeking the existential meaning of love, not simply pursuing recognition as a romantic relationship. Furthermore, being a moral heroine doesn't mean being anti-romantic; it's just that their romantic relationship isn't...
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    When did you decide to quit your story, or why do you keep going?

    Thank you for your suggestion. I've changed the third-person perspective to first-person. I think your opinion makes sense, and I appreciate it. Best regards.
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    When did you decide to quit your story, or why do you keep going?

    I don't know why my abbreviated profile is problematic. I just shared a little bit about myself in real life, and that I enjoy cuddling my little nephews (I have three) and growing flowers. Is the problem here that the profile is written in the third person (Eldoria) instead of the first person (I)?
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    When did you decide to quit your story, or why do you keep going?

    That's right, stories aren't just about satisfying the market, but also about conveying our ideas to readers. This concerns the writer's integrity, and it can't be compromised unless the writer has sold their integrity.
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    When did you decide to quit your story, or why do you keep going?

    I never thought about it. I think it's natural to use a pen name for novels because true authors always want to be known more for their stories than their profile. (maybe? is that just my assumption?)
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    When people prefer to confide in AI, is this a sign of a social empathy crisis?

    https://fastcompanyme.com/technology/people-are-turning-to-ai-for-companionship-is-that-a-problem/
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