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This is my honest review. Please note, I'm not a fan of cyborg stories, I prefer dark fantasy stories. So my assessment is very likely biased. In short, my impression of the prologue is too long-winded, I know you tried to explain the context of the problem in the original world but it was too...

wow... 6 years of writing?

Wow: What the Gods Left Behind [Epic Fantasy] Word Count : 53,219 Average Words : 2,801 Total chapters : 19 Total writing time (month) : 1 Me: Blood Rose Princess Just Wants to Live in Peace with Her Little Daughter Word Count...

"Ian Argus Stuart is an adventurous millionaire known for his unique "castaway" holidays where he spends time alone on remote islands with minimal supplies. He is also a former property owner of sites like No Man's Land Fort and Hastings Pier. His experiences on islands like Hunga Tonga and...

You're very brave in bringing a narrative with a heavy (political) theme to the SH platform amidst the onslaught of isekai power fantasies and erotic stories. Keep up the good work, my friend! If your readership is still small, it doesn't mean your work is bad, but rather that it hasn't found...

The name K'nivi Karé sounds difficult to spell. How do you pronounce it? But Google immediately recognises it as the protagonist of your novel. Congratulations!

The name Sophia Demiurge is easy to remember. But if we separate each word into two separate names, the names will intersect with two mainstream fictions: Sophia - Sophie's World?; Demiurge - Overload? However, if the names are combined with "Sophia Demiurge," the results immediately refer to...

Henry Rider, your character intersects with a historical figure. Awesome. lol? Maybe you should consider a new, unique nickname (the original name that is already running does not need to be changed) so that Google recognizes your protagonist.

Is Your Protagonist Recognised by Google? I am currently writing 4 novels: 1 Female protagonist has 2 novels (2 novels: prequel and sequel), 1 Female protagonist with 2 female bodies 1 soul (1 novel) and 1 normal male protagonist (1 novel). Initially, I did not consider the protagonist's...

The title is too abstract. The synopsis makes my head spin. The cover is too monotonous. You need to fix these three things first: create a catchy title that readers can immediately imagine. Then, create a synopsis that intrigues readers with the "premise" of your novel—usually something...

Bro, I suggest, instead of revising your chapters, you should first revise your title, synopsis, and cover. Your title is too abstract, the cover too monotonous, and the synopsis too bland—what's the point in people reading this novel? You'd be better off giving it a compelling synopsis.

Your statement is beyond the scope of this thread. Remember, the initial question emphasized "the author's opinion," rather than the opinion of readers or literary experts. It was clearly subjective from the start. Yes, I appreciate you for being objective, systematic, and measured. That's...

Bro, you're not wrong, and neither are they. The rating is based on the "author's opinion"; it's purely subjective. If they rate it 10/10, it's not wrong; perhaps they appreciate the hard work they've put in because no one else can. Or they rate it 5-7, perhaps they feel their novels have...

So you write for your satisfaction (existence), not for the satisfaction of others (market)? Good job!

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd appreciate it if you could leave a review, including criticism, suggestions, and a rating if you'd take the time. Best regards.

The title is too abstract and the synopsis makes me dizzy. Honestly, I don't know why should I read it? Fix your title and synopsis first! But at least you didn't put your novel in red genres (R18), which means you're not looking for a shortcut to go viral. Keep it up and keep learning. Best...

I'm glad you appreciate it. You're welcome. Best regards.

I value relationships between women based on caring and embracing each other through hardship as 'sisters', like family (mother-daughter, older sister-younger sister), rather than romance. Stories like this make me cry.

I've been getting those messages. They're not bots because they respond to my messages. But when they offer collaborations, I'm suspicious and don't respond. I'd appreciate someone criticizing my novel more than praising it and offering suspicious collaborations. At least the person criticizing...

What is Your Dominant Approach in Narrating Your Novel? There are four main approaches to narrative fiction: plot-driven, character-driven, moral-driven, and worldbuilding-driven. Each emphasises different aspects of the story and influences how conflict, theme, and narrative development are...