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  1. Eldoria

    I need feedback on my web novel

    You can use AI to create an anime-style cover. Simply write a detailed cover prompt, then enter the prompt into the input, and ChatGPT will create a pretty cover for you.
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    SpongeBob be like: Use your imagination!

    SpongeBob be like: Use your imagination!
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    I need feedback on my web novel

    I will give general suggestions for your novel; you can consider them or not. There are several things you can improve in your fiction: First, you can replace your cover with an anime/LN cover. SH readers tend to prefer LN/anime covers. It's even better if your cover features an elegant...
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    What kind of female relationships do you love in a story?

    Relationships between female characters in the story include: Family relationship (including mother-daughter, aunt-niece, grandmother-granddaughter) Sisterhood relationship (by blood and/or existential, e.g, older sister-little sister bond) Childhood friend relationship (female friends who grew...
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    Exposition - How much is too much/too little

    It depends on how you want to make your story's atmosphere feel more alive. I tend to write descriptions to illustrate how the atmosphere brings the plot to life, using a pattern of general description leading to specific descriptions. This also serves as a bridge or transition between scenes...
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    To readers of harem web novels.

    I tend to avoid the harem + smut genres (especially if the story content is coupled with absurd systems). But I know... I can't stop them from writing the novels they want to write (whether just for fun or to satisfy the market). So, finally I decided to close myself off from novels with 18+...
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    Filtering the Novels in the Latest Updates Based on Preferences

    Wow... that's great. Sorry, I thought this feature didn't exist yet because I couldn't find this setting in my account settings. It turns out it's in another section. Thank you for providing this great feature. Best regards.
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    Filtering the Novels in the Latest Updates Based on Preferences

    Filtering the Novels in the Latest Updates Based on Preferences. I've noticed that SH readers tend to read what they like rather than what novels have good content. So they tend to look at genre first to choose what they'll read. Therefore, I suggest SH provide a feature to filter the latest...
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    Failure to identify with the main character?

    In the early season, when Kirito was trapped in the game, the story was actually quite interesting, presenting a death game with lives at stake. However, everything changed when the author continued to add new girls in each arc. Actually, adding girls is fine, but why do the relationships...
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    What do you think about people who talk to themselves

    In fact, you can't brainstorm (to evaluate your story ideas) without talking to yourself.
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    Taco, Hotdog, or...?

    Oh... this is a thread about foods. I was traumatized by those food names. You know that thread that went viral yesterday with food names but didn't talk about food at all, right? You did a great job of "cleaning up" those food names back to "foods" in the true sense. By the way, I love kebabs.
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    What is the premise of your story in a prompt that readers can understand your story?

    Okay, I revised it to be an observer, without being neutral. Please take your time. Thank you.
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    What is the premise of your story in a prompt that readers can understand your story?

    Write Your Premise of the Story What is the premise of your story in one prompt so that readers can understand the essence of your story? Please write your premise of the story in the prompt: Examples: (1) LOTR: [Frodo Baggins, the hobbit chosen to carry the One Ring full of evil power] +...
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    Your MC is forced into teen drama.

    My FMC wouldn't want to get involved. Marry El Rose would rather take care of her little daughter at home than participate in school drama activities. After all, she had abandoned her royal princess title to become the final judge of humanity and end brutal tyranny. And when she succeeded in...
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    What is and isn't wish fulfillment?

    A story is considered wishfulfillment if the focus is on how the world submits to the protagonist and fulfills his desires, rather than how the protagonist adapts to the world. We know many protagonists (especially in the isekai genre) who obtain cheats, systems, privileges, or special things...
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    Failure to identify with the main character?

    Not reading the novel but watching the SAO anime. I really don't understand what's so interesting about Kirito that every girl who meets him falls in love. And it makes me frown even more because Kirito already has Asuna but the author keeps adding other girls to his harem in every arc. What's...
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    I hate that some protestors using the strawhat flag

    I'm not surprised by that. Even the UN recently attempted to investigate police violence against demonstrators in countries.
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    I hate that some protestors using the strawhat flag

    Well, you're only seeing one side and turning a blind eye to the other. I don't deny the existence of anarchist protesters, but oftentimes, their anarchy stems from the arrogance of the authorities (especially the police, who are supposed to enforce order) and the government's indifference to...
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    I hate that some protestors using the strawhat flag

    For those who have never read One Piece as a masterpiece, they might only see the Straw Hat Pirates' flag as cringeworthy. But they don't know that the flag carries a message of peace. You know how Luffy and his friends adventure in every oppressed country and ultimately liberate those countries...
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    I hate that some protestors using the strawhat flag

    Hey, my friends. Demonstrations are the right of every citizen in a democratic country. You can hate them, but you can't stop them from using pirate flags or something. After all, they're protesting structural injustice in their country. I personally have never been involved in demonstrations...
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