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  1. Eldoria

    Epic Arcs: Marineford, Pain's Invasion and Karakura Town War?

    Which arc do you prefer as more epic between the Marineford (One Piece), Pain's Invasion (Naruto Shippuden) and Karakura Town War (Bleach)?
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    Authors, please read this... *^^*

    That's right. We'll enjoy writing more if we write with a conscience. I write because I want to write. The stories that I keep in my heart, I write, I narrate... and maybe readers will enjoy them. I might not be popular, and people might laugh at my stories. But... at least I'm not lying to...
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    You were sent to another world with a supernatural power?

    You are given a supernatural power (you can determine the supernatural power yourself — of course, the power is not something morally deviant) to live in that other world.
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    Offering Critiques [Open for submissions, adult works welcome]

    20K words for a prologue chapter? Please give new readers some breathing room!:s_eek:?
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    Give me ideas for my second cover!

    It's chibi:LOL:
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    You were sent to another world with a supernatural power?

    You were Sent to Another World with A Supernatural Power? Imagine (of course, this is just a fictional scenario, my friends) that you are sent to another world. You are given a supernatural power (you can determine the supernatural power yourself — of course, the power is not something morally...
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    Give me ideas for my second cover!

    My suggestion is to replace the three characters with three elegant heroines, as is common in anime or LN. Your three characters remind me of children's cartoons, rather than a novel. The title and background colors are already sufficiently contrasting and clearly visible. There's no need to...
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    Writing Dance Scene?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1662165-blood-rose-princess-just-wants-to-live-in-peace-with-her-little-daughter/chapter/1664518/
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    Story about yandere

    You can search for yandere stories using the yandere tag. My story also contains the yandere tag (my antagonist has an obsession with FMC), but I'm not sure it's to your liking. So, it's best to explore yandere stories that suit your preferences using the yandere tag.
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    How many chapters does it take on average to start gaining steady writer?

    I respect your opinion. But it shouldn't be generalized, especially if you're just a casual reader. Authors themselves write fiction and experiment with the word count that attracts readers. This experience is more valid than mere assumption. I've personally conducted this experiment. The...
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    Writing Prologue or no Prologue?

    Your prologue is like an infodump. It leaves new readers without even knowing why they should care. This makes the prologue less engaging. You should write a prologue as a moral premise that raises the ethical conflict you will address in your novel's arc. It should be concise, interesting...
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    What media do you prefer to enjoy fictional stories through?

    Ah... that never occurred to me. I never even took the story in the game seriously (mostly skipped). You can add it yourself.
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    Lf a novel where the Mc is quiet and absolutely overpowered at the start, like yogiri but way more overpowered

    If the ability to manipulate reality is what you're looking for in the definition of an OP MC, then the perfect candidate is Haruhi Suzumiya. She's an OP FMC who can create, erase, and alter the very existence of the world at will—even without realizing it...
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    Lf a novel where the Mc is quiet and absolutely overpowered at the start, like yogiri but way more overpowered

    I asked Grok (I'm tired of asking ChatGPT, lol) about "what is more overpowered than death?" and Grok's answer: In a conceptual or narrative sense, nothing is inherently "more overpowered" than death, as it represents the ultimate end of life and is often depicted as an absolute force in most...
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    Lf a novel where the Mc is quiet and absolutely overpowered at the start, like yogiri but way more overpowered

    No, Saitama won't be able to fight Yogiri. He's looking for an MC stronger than Yogiri. Here's the thing... Yogiri is death itself. Yogiri just says "die" and Saitama stops breathing. Therefore, I'm calling this question ridiculous. The thread creator already knows there's nothing more OP than...
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    Lf a novel where the Mc is quiet and absolutely overpowered at the start, like yogiri but way more overpowered

    This is a ridiculous question. Is there a more OP MC than Yogiri? The short answer is, "none." You can present OP MCs like Goku, Luffy, Ichigo, even isekai MCs like Rimiru, Ainz, and even MCs with super-duper-powerful cheats. But none will compare to Yogiri. After all, Yogiri isn't just an OP...
  17. Eldoria

    The Most Valuable Thing in the Room...

    Hmm... maybe my clothes... not because they are expensive but because the memories are 'too precious'.
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    Failure to identify with the main character?

    Well, Kirito is a generic harem MC. I prefer the heroine, the knight Alice, whose figure reminds me of Saber and Joan of Arc. By the way, the idealistic female knight archetype also inspired the female knight character in the novel I'm still writing.
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    Stories without romance are usually interesting because they focus more on developing the...

    Stories without romance are usually interesting because they focus more on developing the story's premise.
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