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    What do you think about a mother protagonist in the fantasy world?

    Mother Protagonists I love mother protagonists, because besides being rarely mentioned, mother protagonists are also relatable to real life and provide authentic family drama. So the focus of the story is not only on the outside world but also the inner world (family). Two mother protagonists...
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    I avoid the trope of MC always winning, always getting everything she/he wants. MC can cry, get...

    I avoid the trope of MC always winning, always getting everything she/he wants. MC can cry, get sadness: frustrated, angry, depressed, or even destroyed. Even so, I want MC to always rise even if she/he has to crawl from zero. I want a small light that lights up in a dark world. I want a human...
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    What are your favorite tropes? and which ones would you avoid writing?

    I avoid the trope of the MC always winning, always getting everything she/he wants. MC can win, lose, get hurt, (death is 'possible' but it will only happen at the end of the story - although I haven't planned that far). Even if MC wins, she/he must pay a certain price, whether trauma, injury...
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    How do you control an overpowered character so they don't break the story?

    Tricks to making OP characters not ruin the story: By adding character development, ideological conflict, providing ethical boundaries for the use of power, and presenting an equal antagonist.
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    The laziest thing you do as an author?

    I often feel lazy about editing repetitive words in my chapters. I know using repetitive words slows down the pacing. But editing them takes extra effort. I tend to use historical characters' names as dark allegories... for example I took the name of a Soviet dictator and changed the spelling...
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    Do you kill off an important character?

    It depends on their narrative role. A character's death can be tragic, open social wounds, usher in a new era, or simply serve as a shock value. Personally, I wouldn't randomly kill off characters, even if they're just supporting characters. They must fulfill their narrative role before their...
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    The chapter length Goldilocks zone - Time edition

    If the premise of the story is interesting, I will read that chapter to the end... to find out whether the narrative really commits to the narrative promise of the story's premise in the synopsis. I don't think about how long it will take, especially when I have free time. But if the premise of...
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    As an author, how do you feel when writing villains who commit crimes or immoral acts?

    I mean, as authors, we certainly have moral/human values that we uphold in real life. However, when we write a conflict narrative through villain antagonists, we're forced to depict acts of crime or immorality that often run counter to our ethical values. So, how do you feel about it?
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    Getting naruto shippuden-ed sucks

    The hint was too vague and not worthy of foreshadowing. Seeing the moon a lot = there's a mystical creature there?! That's too vague. Seeing the moon can have many metaphors. Honestly, Kaguya is like an Alien to me in the true sense. She suddenly appears as a character very foreign to the...
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    Getting naruto shippuden-ed sucks

    My FMC is a tragic-realistic character with a fantasy twist. Since the synopsis and prologue, I've explicitly explained her setting as a former princess who abandoned her name, honor, and compassion to become the final judge for (sinful) humanity. She executed the tyrants who were the source of...
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    Slow life comparison.

    Well, it's similar in its goal of peace but different in its world context. That isekai is a wholesome fantasy with a bright world. In my fiction, it's a dark world, where peace comes after paying a heavy price (a world of amnesia, social trauma, wounds demanding revenge, etc). It's not that I...
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    Slow life comparison.

    Despite its structural flaws, this is a very solid SoL isekai novel about enjoying life in a 'relaxed' way. I love how the MC just wants to live peacefully with his family in a remote village, instead of going on adventures or saving the world.
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    What to do with backstory?

    Make it the prequel series especially if the backstory contains lore that affects the main story timeline (sequel).
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    What makes you love your fiction?

    What makes you love your fiction? Me: This is a long-held desire of mine that I've only been able to fulfill after years of being merely an observer/reader. I want to write fiction that represents my conscience.
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    Question: Do I just update my existing book for remaster or publish an entirely new book?

    If you're simply editing (e.g., making scene descriptions more immersive, adding details, etc.), there's no need to republish. Simply note that the chapter has been rewritten. However, if you're completely overhauling the fiction, including changing the plot, adding characters, adding...
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    Without spoiling anything, post one joke thats in your story today

    "D-don't tell me… y-you—" Marry stiffened for a moment. Cold sweat trickled down her forehead. She thought little Thomas knew her identity… "Was little Thomas even slightly conscious… during the massacre?!" Marry muttered to herself. "Y-you… must be… the shadow heroine… t-the one who loved...
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    Writing What unique eye skills have you developed in your fiction?

    Unique Eye Skills We know of many supernatural eye skills, such as the Sharingan, Rinnegan, etc. However, I'd like to explore whether other authors have developed unique concepts for supernatural eye powers that differ from the ones commonly found in mainstream fiction. So the question is...
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    What's your take on when the Enemy (Beautiful Female) Forces herself on MC (Male).

    I dislike that... It's like you're blaming the victims (women) or making them the perpetrators. In the real world, the statistics for men abusing women are higher than the reverse. We need to focus on cases of violence against women without turning a blind eye to the opposite (women hurting...
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    Complete Book 1 - Multicultural Fantasy Novella (35k Words)

    They usually come with offers of collaboration or something while praising your work (even though they've only read a few lines). Even more ridiculous than offering a cover is their shameless offer to edit a story idea?! Hey, the author's creative soul lies in the story idea. If they want to...
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    New Story - The Mythos Chronicles

    The synopsis is too infodump-like, preventing readers from immediately connecting with the story's premise. It's better to simplify the synopsis by emphasizing the story's premise.
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