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  1. Eldoria

    Reverse, Reverse!

    My FMC is a young mother who is gentle and loving to her little daughter. She is a former executor of justice against the dead law (read: tyrant killer). She cannot harm innocent people (the limitations of her unique power do not allow it). Well, the prologue of volume 1 explains why she can be...
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    New story cover: The Doll’s Interrogation

    I appreciate your artistic commitment as an artist. However, as a (potential) reader, I'm sorry, but I'll just pass this cover by along with the other stories I scroll through on the homepage. Reason? Personal preference, I love anime covers (whether they're hand-drawn or AI-generated).
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    Feel like im phoning it in

    What I can say is that battles are usually the narrative peak or climax of an arc, a logical consequence of the conflict that has occurred throughout the story. Creating epic, emotional, and symbolic battle scenes is not easy. I tend to let the characters do what they want. I mean, characters...
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    What clichés of talk do you avoid in your fiction?

    What Clichés of Talk do You Avoid in Your Fiction? Me: "Are you okay?" Even though she/he (usually the protagonist) sees that her/his interlocutor is already dying. Reason: Unempathetic words that show an immature character. Instead of asking what she/he already knew (the person she/he was...
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    @pangmida, those words are the introduction to the climax of the arc in Vol. 2.

    @pangmida, those words are the introduction to the climax of the arc in Vol. 2.
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    [IMG] The night fog was breathing, carrying the breath of the vicissitudes of the era.

    The night fog was breathing, carrying the breath of the vicissitudes of the era.
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    ScribbleHub is being invaded!

    The recommended release schedule is 2-4 chapters per week. Releasing every day won't increase engagement. Readers also need to breathe before consuming a new chapter. Releasing 1 chapter per week? You're making readers cry tears of blood. Lol
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    ScribbleHub is being invaded!

    Since I enabled the release filtering feature, the latest updates has been clean. https://www.scribblehub.com/release-filtering/
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    New CN Author Alert! My Epic System Apocalypse LitRPG – "Game-Fall: The Chosen One Rises" – Drops Soon!

    Welcome. We already have Japanese, Korean, and Chinese authors. Now we're the light of Asia. It's important to note that these three countries don't use the Latin alphabet as their native language. Writing fiction in English definitely requires more effort. I appreciate it.
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    “I understand your pain! Your loss… but—” Clara bit her lip. “We’re human… not superheroes who...

    “I understand your pain! Your loss… but—” Clara bit her lip. “We’re human… not superheroes who can save everyone!" "Don’t let your past destroy you—we need you,” Detective Clara said sincerely to Commander Feroux, the Fallen Hero of Bloody Dust, who was depressed on the battlefield.
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    Overfill a story

    Your story must answer the premise you stated in the synopsis. Whether the ending is happy, bittersweet, or even tragic. If you're writing a hero's journey to defeat the demon king, your story should answer the result of that journey. Perhaps the hero wins and the demon king dies (happy...
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    What's the most epic attack you've ever written in fiction?

    Epic Attack In fiction, especially fantasy and action genres, epic attacks from characters (usually antagonists) are often the most memorable moments. I still remember Pain's (Nagato) epic attack with Shinra Tensei destroying Konoha into a crater; and how the epic attack of the Gura-Gura no Mi...
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    Favorite fictional villains?

    You know Pain
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    Villains who are TOO easy to hate?

    Cartoon villains, those who are evil just for the sake of being evil, are characters designed to be hated by readers. The goal is to leave readers emotionally satisfied when they fall and are defeated (or killed). By the way, if I were writing cartoon villains, these characters would usually...
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    Do you have inner monologue?

    Thinking is an inner monologue.
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    Does writing your story make you feel better or worse?

    Both. Fiction has both good and bad effects. What's good? I can express my conscience without any masks. I can freely explore the dark side of humanity, expose it, and then criticise it as a narrative (read: through dark fantasy). This helps channel the negative emotions and thoughts that plague...
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    Thoughts of putting racism in your works

    I tend to expose hidden social wounds in the real world to fuel narrative conflict. Narrating racism as a story conflict demonstrates authorial honesty, exposing real-world social facts as social criticism. As long as your protagonist doesn't condone racism and views it as a social problem, it...
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    As a reader, what do you like or dislike about dark fantasy?

    I copied this answer from my previous answer. Please see the previous comments in this thread: Dark fantasy is a subgenre of literary, artistic, and cinematic fantasy works that incorporates disturbing and frightening themes. The term is ambiguously used to describe stories that combine horror...
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    One Universe with Multi-Series, Which Meets in the Main Conflict of the Main Series?

    One Universe with Multi-Series, Which Meets in the Main Conflict of the Main Series? Imagine writing fiction with one large universe. There, many countries, complete with their own historical, cultural, political, social, and power systems. You take characters from each country as protagonists...
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    I recommend Google Photos for image management.
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