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That's actually an oddly hard to answer question. Out of the three most recent stories, I'd take the one I'm mainly working on for this. Normal Knights and Guards aren't weak per se, even if there's stronger ones around. I'd originally say the younger stepsister of the MC, but she's still a...

Well, I don't think it matters much. Is it something to worry about? I don't know, maybe I should be worried about how I do things myself. That... I don't think that level of fuckery can be chalked up to rewriting two things at the same time.

I think you misspelled "Pew". It's important. I guess.

It's objectively bad writing, period. Maybe I'm old school, but while small sounds can be taken in, like creaking or a dripping sound, they should always be somewhat integrated into text. So a flat one line of SWOOSH doesn't cut it. And while in a visual medium, you get to have the sound to add...

I mean... sure, why not.

I believe it has always been that way, because people can feel differently about things. There's certain objective details that are humanly innate, you can't misread them unless you want to. Recently had a dude tell me people "froze for no reason" when it was during the first action sequence and...

I would be in for it. I don't have an extreme lot of time, but I feel like that might be a good idea. Gaining insight from people of different walks of life, especially if the group isn't extremely big and thus a bit more personal; there would be more of a chance to actually engage with each...

No, I meant that I need to back-translate my English written story into German, but I don't want to do it by hand. But I also hate the fact that I have to revise it, because translation programs won't get me a perfect translation or anything of the sort. Anyway, I guess revising still better...

Yeah, I thought of DeepL as well. It's still going to be mush, I will have to thoroughly revise it. Pain. But I'm not going to write the whole story twice, just to have it in German. :blob_blank:

I mean, I feel ya. I'm currently revising my main project, because I'm close to getting Season 1 done. Then I have to throw it through a random translater and work through the entire story again.

You should have told me you needed a meme like that. I happen to have the perfect one at hand.

I don't think it's a bad thing and never considered it to be something strange. I've read it in a lot of officially published books as well, and there's editors to sort out what can't be done. That why I don't really get behind the idea of agonizing over this matter as some people do - I'm not...

Hm, just from the synopsis, none of this seems to have anything to do with the concept of AoT. In fact, I wouldn't touch it, because I have to assume you will play off of some traits that are supposed to be known by friends of the franchise, but by saying this was for people wo "liked Attack on...

Not on patereon, because I don't get how to properly use that, but it's a fact that there's a lot of things you aren't allowed to write. It's written. Stories are to live out fantasies you specifically wouldn't want to try out in reality. Why can I write a story in which one murders the other...

Holy DingleWingle. Was it Tarantino or Schneider? Also, I need to vent some more. :blob_cookie: I mean, I get it, people just don't like putting in work for anything, but seriously? So I actually got a review tonight, saw it in the morning, together with two chapter comments. Never seen the...

Agree on this one. But only if you actually manage to come up with an idea for it, otherwise it will just feel contrived. If it has to be an ass pull, leave it, otherwise it might prove interesting.

I don't really see the reason why you would seek feedback on uncooked soup, to be honest. Maybe I'm cynical, but you never know what's actually becoming of it, because everything may sound really good or really shitty when it's still just a concept.

Again, that is one theory of something that doesn't exist, therefore, in literature, you always go in different ways and possibilities. Also, even that just means what everyone else was trying to tell you. In and of itself, it doesn't matter how many molecules dance in the wrong direction...

First of all: It doesn't make you sound like anything but a normal writer in my opinion. As we all, as far as I experienced, hate what we write at some point, when challenged, we will still see all the parts we think are good. And you wouldn't be an artist, if there weren't days when you look at...

Well, I'm always full of complaints, aren't I? :blob_cookie: No, seriously, there was someone who once wrote in an official Amazon review that there's something they don't see any explanation for. When I took the question and partially put it in the search within the manuscript document in...