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Agree. Other questions are also biased, such as those regarding FMC's royalty background and special power. The problem is, royalty background and special power are more like plot devices common in royal fantasy fiction. Labeling a character as a Marry Sue just because she - who is a royalty...

Well, if my FMC hadn't pursued the last tyrant of the Rose kingdom in the ancient ruins, then the world wouldn't have experienced a historical amnesia apocalypse where the victims could move on after being forced to forget the history of brutal oppression. But if my FMC hadn't pursued the last...

Kira (Yagami Light) is a god complex who judges the world as he pleases. My FMC only judges the systemic sinners (tyrants) and unable to kill innocent people

Your Character is 34% Mary Sue! 34% You're doing great, but there might be a bit of Sue creeping into your writing. Keep up the good work, though, and remember your character development! My FMC is a judge of the world like Kira but she is more humane and not god complex.

Congrats. But you need 400 more readers to get the title of rising star author, dude.

Which is worse getting a low rating or getting no rating at all?

It seems like just another fantasy drama with bloody violence. But that's just my opinion. I'm also a dark fantasy writer. So these scenes feel pretty ordinary.

Characters are plots. By narrating a protagonist who is relatable to the reader's life, the plot and conflict will follow the protagonist's journey. If the protagonist is poor but caring for his sick sister, then the plot of finding a cure will be carried out organically. The author just adds...

Dude... "excited" is too relative and general. An OP protagonist might excite readers who are bored with slow development. Conversely, a weak to strong protagonist might excite readers who like progression. Finally, you can't please everyone. Instead of worrying about how to please readers...

I mentioned earlier in this thread the use of dialogue tags as a practical tool for character navigation in web novel chapters. We can't expect new readers to start reading from chapter 1 (even though I hope so). Without adequate character identity clues, dialogue tags, new readers will have a...

Using of Dialogue Tags in Fiction In dialogue, tags are often used to briefly identify characters. Dialogue tags like "Barry said...", "...Annie said, patting Barry's shoulder," "...the blonde girl complained," etc, can provide quick navigation in identifying who is speaking while providing...

Pray for world peace...

Well, I don't know what you're looking for in characterization feedback?! Are you trying to synchronize how your character design is perceived by readers? I don't know Aegis' character design. But from this chapter... I just see Aegis as a helpless, obedient teenage boy. He's weak, timid, and...

No one is wrong about seeking honest and constructive feedback. But seeking feedback through a mutually beneficial exchange is problematic... and actually keeps you from honest feedback. Why? Because you're turning feedback into a "transaction" that's simply about "profit." As a result, the...