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Mr Sun was angry :blob_pout:

I can't help you. My magic can't calm Mr Sun who was angry. :blob_pout:

Furthermore, several famous authors have tried to avoid plot armor. One way is by creating multiple protagonists who could die at any time. A Song of Fire and Ice is a famous example, and one reason why this fiction is hated. We also have an anti-plot armor writer here, for example @MFontana

Well, plot armor has long been a point of criticism among literary critics. This trope makes the story predictable and the world seems to serve (revolve around) MC. But of course, that's beyond the scope of the review above.

That's what the reviewer criticized. The autobiographical format kills the suspense of the story itself. :blob_melt:

The problem with autobiographical stories, MC writes from a 'future' perspective where he is 'safe' to tell his story to the readers. Even if the MC faces an apocalypse-level disaster in his autobiography, the readers will still feel safe, because they already know MC has overcome that danger...

Let me explain it simply as an outside observer... a story is suspenseful because it maintains a layer of mystery. If the reader doesn't know... MC's fate when he is involved in a conflict, whether MC is sick, injured, or even dies, then the reader can continue to feel suspenseful.

What about Boku no Hero?

Her assessment is harsh but fair. Even if you gave it one star, I wouldn't be disappointed. :blob_aww:

Good night :blob_melt: