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Banned for forcing people to join discord.

Edit, edit, edit.

Banned for bullying the victim.

Banned for not capitalizing the first letter of your sentence and yet have the gals to complain to me about grammar.

Banned for having no capital letters in your name,

That's my secret cap. I'm always stressed.

Banned for using the em-dash like that.

Banned for inappropriate butt joke.

Koto has joined the game.

Well, I have a full time job. Just try to put in an hour a night or so solely for writting/editing. You'll be surprise at how much you can get done. Good luck with your endeavours btw! :blob_reach:

You can contact tony by @ him or dm him or make a suggestion thread. I too would like that kind of review where you can put stars into different areas.

Ahh, so that's what you mean. Doves when in flight in my area are not gentle. I had assumed blizzard = harsh. Doves= snow as large as doves. Then I thought, damn these poor people are getting hit by that? :blob_no::blob_no::blob_no::blob_no::blob_no:

Hmm, not gonna lie but your story actually reminds me of FROSTPUNK, it's a game where the theme is permanent winter. Some sort of ice age. The intro of that game showed a bunch of colonist walking through the permanent winter and found a steam engine in the bottom of a valley. They then...

Banned for only coming to this forum to play this game.

I keep looking back to my old chapters and keep finding grammar errors. Dammit, how did I even missed all these?

This will be helpful in the future! Good work as always Tony!

What I hate most is the pacing of my stories. I try to make the transition flow better, but oftentimes it just feels awkward. It sounds better when I read it out loud though. So I can't tell whether it's just me reading too fast or am I just imagining things. And then you have those moment...

Banned for not admitting to your mistakes.