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Banned for being offended by being called an owl.

banned for being bad owl.

Banned for banning nice people. You bad.

Banned for not allowing me to edit my post.

It's tough for me. Cause I got other things I want to do other than writing as well and with the free time you have you can only do so much. (I wanna play game) I'll usually take breaks during lunch/bus trips/etc to edit and proofread while taking the time of the night or one of the weekends to...

Banned for saying something so kind. Edit:Shameless plug. Please leave a like and a comment or two and let me know if you find anything wrong so I can improve on it.

:blob_dizzy: Damn. I didn't know the report button had such a rule. Edit: oh it seems the two post has merged.

Banned for fart jokes.

There is, it's all the way to the left, on the same row as reply and quote.

Thanks. I've read all of your comments in the chapter and I do agree I got a lot of fixing with grammar. Notably the overusing of nouns and the past/present tense problems. I am of course, actively trying to improve on this. So once again thanks for pointing out my mistakes. I'll prolly update...

Man is it me or does the forum feels empty lately?

I agree. Though on the contrary, I do like villains who you know are just bad but complex at the same time. It doesn't always have to be a grey area. Some people can be just bad cause that's just how they are.

Banned because I don't know what a fujiyoshi princess is.

How about these two? Isekai yuyuri Kikou -Man spoils two children gods rotten. Nigotta-hitomi-no-lilianne A man reborn into a child. Gets spoiled rotten from the whole family. Not sure if these are to your liking.

I've read all four chapters. Grammar is great. The premise is interesting. In terms of writing, there is nothing much for me to say here. In terms of storytelling, I do have a few things I noticed when reading the story. Something felt off from the beginning until the end of chapter 4. I can't...