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  1. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    Hmm all these sound good on paper but needs a certain spice to it something to make it special, from the synopsis two of them just sound like isekai power fantasy with smut, the third one the other hand did pick my interest more.
  2. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    Sure but I still need that selfless plug
  3. ConcubusBunny

    Writing The mc freaking dies

    Fair enough if you feel that you're uncomfortable with it then don't.
  4. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    I was sorta expecting indepth generalized explanation of the chapter to hype it up to someone who wishes to read, think of it like an episode for a show to get ppl invested in how it's gonna turn out, that sorta of thing but this is good too. Also if you have some rough notes or plot points for...
  5. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    Yeah I tend to rush my writing so then it feels like english is my second language, I'm working on it also if have some smut stories I'd love to read them
  6. ConcubusBunny

    Writing The mc freaking dies

    I didn't mean for shock value I actually meant for something casual killing like against the big bad before the final blow is stroke leaving them to be arogant and be killed by one of the mc comrade's leaving for one of them to be the new mc, everyone always likes a happy ending but I prefer a...
  7. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    Alrighty I've decided to get back into writing... somewhat. So here I am with a brand new thread I don't just want you all to promote your stories but share ideas and chapter synopsis for them and we, or just I can rate them as best as I can, I can't get to them all but I'll try my best to read...
  8. ConcubusBunny

    Writing The mc freaking dies

    Hello my fellow writers I wanted your advice on something and that's stakes for your mc most ppl will think that they'll be no way you raise the stake so high and you actually kill the mc but then you do kill the mc like you hinted you would from the start what do you do how will you address...
  9. ConcubusBunny

    How do you write a Smart MC if you're lazy and stupid?

    I think that the easiest way to do this is let them figure out the stuff, you don't need to make everyone dumber just not as smart as them, like say there is a clue to a murder make most ppl overlook but not the smart mc they are hot on that detail but don't something obvious like less a foot...
  10. ConcubusBunny

    Share your stories

    I like your story very much, the story is original and the power system seems very interesting. I can't wait until the story unfolds keep up the good work. Although you shouldn't skip some important parts of the story like the meeting with the scylla. That could've been interesting to read.
  11. ConcubusBunny

    Share your stories

    I really like your story, you are very good at describing the story. But you might want to break it down, cut some stuff to makeke it less long winded, it'll work wonders cause the last thing people want is to read half a page describing a single scene. But good job, can't wait to see how the...
  12. ConcubusBunny

    Share your stories

    If you want to review my series here is the link Demonic affinity Still new though.
  13. ConcubusBunny

    Share your stories

    Alright after reading your series I must say that I enjoy it a a lot. I love the clever spin you gave your series using an older mc instead of a younger and the summoning of anime characters just made more enjoyable, the characters feel more real than most transmigration works I've seen...
  14. ConcubusBunny

    Share your stories

    If your willing for me to review your work sure
  15. ConcubusBunny

    Why? What makes you want to write? What is your "Writer's Creed"?

    I write primarily to make people enjoy themselves and share the stories in my head with like minded people. Money and fame are kind of secondary for my goals Check out my series: Demonic affinity
  16. ConcubusBunny

    Share your stories

    I'm always looking for a new story to read from new authors struggling to gain readership. Share your stuff here, It's bound to catch someone's attention. Also we could review each others work to give feedback for our stories, it's always nice to have someone tell what you're doing wrong.
  17. ConcubusBunny

    Share your art!

    Hi guys, I'm new here and I wanted to make this thread so we can all share our works. New works please to spread the word of our works across authors.
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